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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-02-04 11:02 PM

  
   Your thoughts meet mine
   like quartered rhyme.
   (If I could dance, I'd dance for you...)
   Wish you could play piano,
   so I could sing the blues.

   Wish I could take my pen--
   re-write the truth untrue.
   Wish I could light a candle,
   and incantate "Undo..."

   If I could summon angels,
   I'd send every one to you.

   If you would play piano,
   I'd have no need of blues.
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Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 2000-02-04 11:27 PM

You sound a little lonely, serenity
hope everythings ok

Rex
Denise
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3 posted 2000-02-05 12:26 PM

This is beautiful, Serenity! A very lovely sad song.

Denise
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2000-02-06 08:56 PM

Thanks again for the encouragement.  I'll have to offer something a little more upbeat, but even my humor comes out dark.     But fear not Rex, I'm okay, and all of you guys are great!
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2006-01-28 06:25 PM

Bumping stuff for Mysteria again.
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6 posted 2006-01-28 07:06 PM

yippee, one I never read before.
I love it!
Drauntz
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7 posted 2007-05-17 08:32 PM

this is beautiful poem of singing sorrow for self.

felt it. good poem though.
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