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Art Takes A Holiday
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Art Takes A Holiday |
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Mars Junior Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 10 |
Art Takes A Holiday Were art for thou? Would that it be? At the beach? In the snow fall’s Call to arms? In a single drop of Salty water Rejoining the cistern And the brethren In random notes Mixed with fresh, And clean? Mars |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
Ah, this is refreshing. Very different than most! I really like it. I have read it several times and I am still trying to get it. It is beautiful whatever it means. Sometimes I am "slow" to getting things. Chris |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family...check your email for a special welcome..... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Nice poem Mars!!!! I love poems that make you think...ones that aren't inherently obvious!! Very cool!! Welcome to Passions!!!!!!  Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I loved your word choice, word play and message. One thing though, I hope you didn't mean "cistem" for system. Otherwise, you made fun of pretentiousness with more pretentiousness. Either way, I really enjoyed this. Mike |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Aha!! The Martians have landed!! ...along with the cistern and the brethren.... Awesome... Welcome to our Passionate world....    |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Hey Mars...welcome to Passions, you'll like the work and diversity here. Loved the cistern and the brethren! I always like your free~ing style. Take care, Claire (I know I owe you a note, will send it soon) [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 02-04-2000).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
As he actually focuses on the screen -- OH, CISTERN. Forgive my bad eyesight. Mike |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Interesting Welcome to passions |
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