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Cupid's Pearled Wing (In response to the Valentine Challenge)
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Cupid's Pearled Wing (In response to the Valentine Challenge) |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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A softly blooming ballad, Touched by golden dew, The sunrise of our destiny, Graced with rosy hue. A rhapsody of heartbeat, Floating upon my skin, With the flutter of eternity, True love does begin. The whisper of our eyes, Hinting of the fire, The locking of our gaze, Releases soft desire. Upon cupid's pearled wing, My dreams begin to fly, And with you here with me, I can touch the endless sky. The sorrow of my spirit, Is slowly swept away, As with you, my valentine, My soul so gently sways. *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Awwwwwww ! Krista- If I found this in a card shop ... I'd buy it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Awwwwww....  wonderful love poem! I'm sure Jeffy boy will love this! Ready for Valentine's day? Hehe, I finally can get bon-bons...  In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sweet and romantic, Krista! Denise |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
The whisper of our eyes, Hinting of the fire, The locking of our gaze, Releases soft desire. My favorite passage in this wonderful poem Jenny Lee |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A wonderful, romantic, beautiful poem Krista ! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all! *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Absolutely beautiful...take Marge up on her offer and submit this to a card company so she will have to buy it |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Krista... you do beautiful work. I'm so happy for you. You have a wonderful skill that will take you far, and isn't being wasted. I'm proud to call you my bestist friend in the whole wide world. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Krista What a beautiful poem for Valentines Day. Excellent verses and rhyme. Very enjoyable reading. You're Good! In fact, you're better than good! Liz |
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