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I thought diamonds were forever...
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I thought diamonds were forever... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Whispering softly to the moon asking quietly why lover's wings get broken all too soon in losing closeness comes back in How can we share this together the promises yet we broke the chain and in our hearts feel so alone still we laugh and share the pain Pictures of castles made of sand in dreams we lived together how long is love supposed to shine I thought diamonds were forever... The grape passes through the press to yield wine. Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom.. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad yet beautiful, Rainbow Girl! Quite lovely!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
This one is a gem ... it sparkles with loving feelings. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is one of your best (if I had to choose)...simply lovely...flowing...I really like it! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really nice Rainbow. I think that diamonds are forever...but if we pick the wrong diamond it takes off on us. (laugh) James |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Denise: Thanks you..  Marge: I hope that comes across.. PDV: Thanks Sharon I appreciate that.. Jamie: I guess so.. HUGS The grape passes through the press to yield wine. Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom.. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Ahh, but diamonds are forever, they just don't shine bright every minute of the day, but you should see them when they catch the light of a Rainbow. Great poem Cindy. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RG, maybe not diamonds, but definately Rubies! Rubies are forever, at least for me! I love reading your poetry!  -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RG, Your speaking of diamonds in the rough of course? Enjoyed the poem. *L* |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
I have to agree with PdV....one of the finest! "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
If I would have a diamond I would give it to you Not as a lover but as a friend to you Hugs and Love will some day die with me But the diamond will forever be with thee So If I had a diamond I would give it to you For your a friend of mine that I love too But a diamond could never be as beautiful as thee Beautiful Poerty < !signature--> The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. [This message has been edited by HelmutB (edited 02-05-2000).] |
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