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Someday you will feel the same way
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Someday you will feel the same way |
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conman New Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 4 |
Tonya Kay, wow what can I say just thinking of you instantly brightens my day When I am with you everything seems so right I can't imagine a better place to be than here with you tonight You are so beautiful yet you don't even know it I never told you before because I was so scared to show it You are so perfect in every way This I wish you could see Someday I hope you will understand just how much you mean to me You smile is so beautiful like a rainbow after the storm I wish I could see you more often You fill my heart with warmth You eyes are like stars always shining so bright When they look into mine I now know why I am here with you tonight When I go to bed at night My mind is on you I lay there wondering Are you thinking of me too? You are so great in so many ways It is impossible to express in words That is why when I am with you my heart is as free as a bird I have never had feelings before like the ones I have for you Hopefully someday you will feel the same way too |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Conman, such sweet,tender,loving feelings here! Great poem! Welcome!  -SEA |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Welcome, Conman. A wonderful poem and a great way start.  ~Gene |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions,Conman! This is such a beautiful love poem! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions |
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conman New Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 4 |
Everyone,thank you for making me feel so welcome. It makes me feel great. This is how I truly feel about a girl right at this moment. I am going to take her out on Valentines day and give her a rose and read it to her. I hope that she likes it. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I bet she'll love it!! I can sooo relate to this!! Lovely poem Conman!! Welcome to Passions!!!!!! Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very sweet. You managed to take the observational cliches of first love and turn them into something original. That's hard to do. Welcome. Mike |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful , So sweet I hope she returns the same feelings Welcome to passions |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Romantic and nice. Made me think about that old Elvis song "Love Me Tender" James |
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