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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I held a dream in the palm of my hand. I held it too tight. It turned into sand. All I had left was the sand and the sweat, that slipped through my fingers, leaving only regrets. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You know I think that most of the people here have stood in those shoes well written ...short and precise Rex |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
How did you know the story of my life?  Short, sweet and to the point. Great job. "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Short but says it all. I enjoyed this! Denise |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity, this is a really great poem. So many here can relate. By the way, short and to the point works for me!  -SEA |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
You have done it again. Great poem Need I say more. Rich |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You have spoken volumes with very few words...nicely done |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
this is marvelous, dear SB. beautiful. truly. |
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