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Heartache ( Marilyns' Challenge )
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Heartache ( Marilyns' Challenge ) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Heartache ~~~~~~~~ Theres something on my chest the pain's excrusiating like a stab beneath my breast The days are long I sigh and moan at night I get no rest ~ I pace the floor two days or more no apparent place to go A weary weight oppresses me Just why I do not know ~ Money's not an issue so put that plan to rest I fear the need to trust someone and get this off my chest ~ My friends in kind are true and blue they want to ease my grief I doubt that their intentions tried could bring my heart relief ~ My love's not lost my family's fine I think this pain at best Is nothing but my home made wine I drank and can't digest ~~~ Rex }<{{{{o> |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another great surprise ending, Rex! Keep 'em comin'!  Denise |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I was wondering where this would end up...and Denise was right, it was a surprise! Well done, Rex! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks Sally - reader beware! Well Denise ... I'll keep 'em comin' if y'r willin' t' suffer through 'em Rex |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Dost mine eyes decieve me, or has my most favored word passed thy pen? (challenge, that is -- LOL) I don't know what the challenge was (though I'd like to), but I like the poem much!  --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Rex...great job!! keep 'em coming. I need the laughs. Kess..I'll bump up the challenge thread for you.. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanktou Kess and Marilyn I'll have to dig deeper to find some funny poems to post ... glad you like my writing... a lot of people don't Rex |
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