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Lynn Wood New Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 8Manchester, N.H. |
I looked out upon the cold, cold snow, Taking up in my hand from down below, A glorious handful of that frozen dew. Within that hand I wondered of you. What I saw in that hand was a single flake, Complex in form I could only make. Each single branch repeated six times, As though to be completing it's predestined rhymes. This flake of mine, It's beauty devine, Guaranteed by nature it's singularity, Altogether I'm awed by it's glistening rarity. Suddenly it strikes me, A feeling that fails to let be. That this totally awesome, wondrous snowflake of dew. Cannot begin to be as beautiful as you! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, this is beautiful! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise (hey, that's my name too!) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Welcome to Passions Lynn  Your poem is lovely...thank you for sharing..... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely, welcome to passions Have you ever noticed That the words... "Goodbye" "I'm sorry" "I love you" Are so easy to pronounce ...Yet so hard to say ~Javan |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Intricately beautiful WELCOME! We are glad to have you with us. Paul |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
If I sent you my picture ... you might consider changing the last line  Liked it ... welcome Rex }<{{{{o> |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lynn, this is so sweet! Welcome! - SEA |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Lynn, Welcome to the forums. Beautiful entrance. ~Gene |
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Lynn Wood New Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 8Manchester, N.H. |
I'm flabberghasted, at a loss for words. Thanks to all of you! By the way-thanks to MY Denise. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wow!! What a wonderful piece!! I just recently moved from Alaska!! I do soo miss the snow and my friends who are all in their own unique ways beautiful!! Welcome to Passions!!!! Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is excellent very beautiful , Welcome to passions |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lyn What a beautiful poem..Welcome to passions, hope you enjoy this haven as much as I do. Tracie  |
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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49 |
Beutiful poem. Welcome to passions |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Wow...I was hoping that was to me...*smiling* Simply lovely... Breathe~..(another Denise) |
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