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Gentle Love |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
What a funny face you show to me Laughter lightened with glee As each day I look at thee I bask in loves wondrous sea With these hands that lay upon my face Gently brushing my lips I feel the warmth of bright light you shine And I become full, enriching my spirit with all of you Your words sing out to me, reaching deep beyond my being To the universe where wings fly and still the hearts flow I am blessed to have held it, for this instant As forever more, this magic I will know Tori 2000 If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So sweet and tender, Tori! Very lovely! Denise |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
this is really beautiful! i loved it alot! ~ViXeN~ |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks much for reading.. glad you enjoyed! If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Laurel Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 22 |
tori, this is a very romantic poem! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tori, gentle indeed! How very sweet!  -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tori, Very romantic, enjoyed the poem. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks Sea and Sey...oops ...  If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How wonderfully romantic |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori, tori, tori, big sigh! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Oh to be in love again...*sigh* What a wonderful tribute... ) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tori- This is lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you all for reading and your kind words. See Dove.. once in a while the good stuff slips out......  )If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Patrick B Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 58uk |
The things love makes us do and say....beautiful hello darkness my old friend |
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