Open Poetry #5 |
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Love from distant past |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
A long time ago, it happened love from distant past, as though destiny wove a path to bring us together You appeared, red dress, blue eyes, embracing smile, married and I, successful, outgoing, overly friendly, married A long time ago, it began the days of you and I on this road of reckless passion we traveled, wantonly filling needs that were hidden or never discussed every avenue of ecstacy traveled fantasies fulfilled A long time ago, it happened when a secret love soared now only memories, hardly recognizable both still married, separately distance and time, years gone by tracks in sand, long since washed away Moments of splender, nights so tender longing for that distant past |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Danny, while this was a lovely poem, and it painted a sad picture, I feel sorry for your wife and the other woman's husband. I just don't agree with cheating on your spouse- for any reason. Maybe because I was cheated on.-SEA |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Beautiful Danny! All to often we find a moment of completeness in the wrong place at the right time. To some it may be adultery and for others that second cup of cappuccino.....(LOL) Everyone longs for fulfillment be it past or present. ~Shell |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Danny, We always seem to find what we need at a time when it can't possibly work out. This makes me very sad ![]() |
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Rosalind Palafox
Registered
MemberPosts 88 |
Realizing what u truly desired all along is what usually happens when it is too late. Personally i would hope you still have that same desire for your wife(if the poem is about u), but let's face reality, so many people have these same hidden feelings, so i am giving your poem a straight plus +++Rosie XOOXXOOXOXOXOXOXOOXOXOXOXOXOXOOXOXOXOXOXOOXOX "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with." |
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