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Canadian Wild.............................Repost from #2
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Canadian Wild.............................Repost from #2 |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Canadian Wild I would if I could, take a touch of black a bit of white and gray on my back, feathers and soft down to make me soar, and then I would ask for one thing more. I would if I could, take my forever love and wing with him ever so high above tenderly calling out to my life’s mate together in life, then at heaven’s gate. I would if I could, be this creature for this lovely bird has a special feature the geese mate for life, up to heaven’s door and for a life’s love, I’d not ask anything more. ©KRJ 22 September, 1999 Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
It sounds as though your heart has already taken flight. Nicely written1 DH |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Danny, it's been said I'm a little "Flighty!" Thanks! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sunshine, Very beautiful poem. So are you saying your a wild Canadian. Parker |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Sunshine!  Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No, Parker, just taking a little poetic license. Canada lies to the north of this little Kansan. Denise - thanks again for coming in to read! < !signature--> Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 02-02-2000).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful Sunshine! Simply lovely.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine- You sure took wing with this one. Wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pepper, Marge, thank you for reading. This is indeed a tribute to my husband, and I would share it with him, if he didn't make fun of my "poul--try"... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I would if I could too =) This is great!! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Echo! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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