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Witch Poem (by my 9 year old daughter )
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Witch Poem (by my 9 year old daughter ) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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My 9 year old daughter wrote this last October in anticipation of the coming of Halloween  WITCH POEM One dark and scary night I crept outside to a fresh moon light I shouldn't have gone It was very dark I thought I saw a witch but that was just the start ~ The witch swooped down and tied me to her broom I tried to get free but what for I'm doomed ~ She took me to her castle it gave me quite a scare Okay it was so scary that I nearly lost my hair ~ She grabbed me by the arm and took me to her room She chained me to her table and left me with her broom ~ I looked around the bedroom and then I saw a tool I don't know what its called but it looked pretty cool ~ It was laying right beside me so I grabbed it in my hand I used it on the chains and they broke now ain't that grand ~ I jumped down off the table and took the broom with me I said some magic words and out the window Weeeeeeeeee ~ Past the houses moon and stars and home to bed where I dream of chocolate bars ~~~~ Jennifer McCoy Oct 99 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! I can see that she inherited her Daddy's talent for writing! This is wonderful!  Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Delightfully spooky! (and funny!) Great Job, Jennifer! Claire |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rex, your daughter is talented! Jennifer- GREAT JOB!!!  This is fantastic! I hope you keep writting. -SEA |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Jennifer, this is wonderful ! I love it |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Yes, Jennifer. Don't stop writing! This reminds me of my poems at your age, which isn't too long ago!  Joy [This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 02-02-2000).] |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Rex..Your daughter is adorable! Jennifer...great writing, don't ever stop!! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Dear Jennifer, You write very well! I want to encourage you to keep writing, because you have a real talent! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks everyone ... she reads a lot including my poems She has written about ten poems in the past six months and seems to enjoy it. I'll get her to read all the mail here and I know she'll be very happy. Thanks again Rex |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is a wonderful poem Jennifer Will you share some more of your pieces? Really enjoyed this!!!!< !signature--> A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 02-04-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just Enough New Nice Intriguing Feeling Ever Radiant Jennifer,of all the Halloween poems I've read, yours keeps playing in my head. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
HEY!!!!! So it was YOU that stole my broom!! That wasnt very nice hehe J/K This is great and I too think that you have a wonderful talent and I hope that you keep writing!! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
This is very good! If Jennifer is only nine and can already accopmlish this....then she will most definately become famous for her writing!! Alina Le Ann |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Looks like another up and coming talent...  ) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks everyone ...Jenns' head is swollen she read most of the responces here and is telling all her friends to read this group She even told her teacher at school she is going to post some more, but the web site only alows one person per e-mail address so we need to get her a hotmail account Rex}<{{{{o> watch for her ( minni poet ) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jennifer, what a lovely poem you have written, well Done! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Alias Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 30 |
hey jennifer great poem... i could hardly even write when i was nine, let alone write a cool poem! keep up the good work, Alias |
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arien78 New Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 1 |
Hey , Jennifer... Loved your poem girl.Its so amazing,you are just 9 and yet so talented.you are a prodigy. Your Dad must be a real proud man.you really have got it in you to become a great poet. love Siva. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Hey Jennifer you doing fine You're outdoing your dad Pretty scary there I'm way impressed You certainly are blessed and so is your Dad The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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mini poet Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 56Canada |
My very first poem! Hehe |
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