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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2000-02-02 09:51 AM


  Daniel's Song


Watch you as you grow
Run around to and fro'
You are my one and all
Love you forevermore
As bright as the sun
You are my clever one
My sweet little boy
You bring me much Joy


I love you Daniel
You're my pride and Joy
Sweet little Daniel
Beautiful boy!

This is Daniel's Song
To him this does belong
Now and forever more
Remember me when you fall
When you become a man
I'm sure you'll understand
Deep within your heart
Our love will never part

I love you Daniel
You're my pride and Joy
Sweet little Daniel
Beautiful boy!


Mummy!




 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-02 10:31 AM


A beautiful song from a mother's heart! Simply beautiful, Dark Angel!  
Denise

WhtDove
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2 posted 2000-02-02 10:38 AM


DA this was so very precious! What a treasure from his mummy!  Aww!

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there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-02-02 11:21 AM


This is so precious, he's one lucky young fellow  
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 2000-02-02 12:05 PM


DA: ohhhhhhh...I'm reading all the tear jerkers today..

HUSG

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Martie
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5 posted 2000-02-02 02:20 PM


This is so sweet and heart spoken.  Loved it!

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 02-02-2000).]

JOY 14
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6 posted 2000-02-02 05:25 PM


So sweet.  I'm sure he'll cherish it always and especialy when he's all grown up.
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7 posted 2000-02-02 09:27 PM


Puts me in mind of Mr. Holland's Opus - if you haven't seen it, you would like it, I am sure.  Well Done.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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8 posted 2000-02-03 07:32 AM


Awwwwwww DA *snif, snif* this is so beautiful - you write from the heart such beautiful pieces. D is definately a lucky boy to have such a wonderful soul as his Mum. I bet he would sing back to you:

Oh Mummy, Mummy,
My tender one, my sweet,
I will love you beyond forever,
From my golden heart I speak,
Because you are to me,
The blazing sun in my universe,
You bring me life, love and happiness,
More than all the treasure in the world are you worth.

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9 posted 2000-02-03 07:37 AM


Tugging at my heartstrings.
~*Marge*~


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Dark Angel
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10 posted 2000-02-04 01:40 AM


Thank you all so very much, this is indeed precious to me. Thanks for your kind replies.  
Moonshine, thanks for your poem, it's beautiful and you are right, he does sing back to me.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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11 posted 2004-05-11 12:04 PM



"I love you Daniel
You're my pride and Joy
Sweet little Daniel
Beautiful boy!"

see, a fine example of true love...the love you have for your son is beautiful...and i know how it feels! those little men are a journey to the end of the rainbow...always met with a pot of gold

Dark Angel
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12 posted 2004-05-11 06:58 PM


Dawn, thank you, goodness this is an oldie hehe and I used to rhyme then  
Speaking of rainbows.. we saw a huge one on the way to school this morning



M

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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