Open Poetry #5 |
Daniel's Song! |
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Daniel's Song Watch you as you grow Run around to and fro' You are my one and all Love you forevermore As bright as the sun You are my clever one My sweet little boy You bring me much Joy I love you Daniel You're my pride and Joy Sweet little Daniel Beautiful boy! This is Daniel's Song To him this does belong Now and forever more Remember me when you fall When you become a man I'm sure you'll understand Deep within your heart Our love will never part I love you Daniel You're my pride and Joy Sweet little Daniel Beautiful boy! Mummy! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful song from a mother's heart! Simply beautiful, Dark Angel! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA this was so very precious! What a treasure from his mummy! Aww! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is so precious, he's one lucky young fellow |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DA: ohhhhhhh...I'm reading all the tear jerkers today.. HUSG Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so sweet and heart spoken. Loved it! [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 02-02-2000).] |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
So sweet. I'm sure he'll cherish it always and especialy when he's all grown up. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Puts me in mind of Mr. Holland's Opus - if you haven't seen it, you would like it, I am sure. Well Done. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Awwwwwww DA *snif, snif* this is so beautiful - you write from the heart such beautiful pieces. D is definately a lucky boy to have such a wonderful soul as his Mum. I bet he would sing back to you: Oh Mummy, Mummy, My tender one, my sweet, I will love you beyond forever, From my golden heart I speak, Because you are to me, The blazing sun in my universe, You bring me life, love and happiness, More than all the treasure in the world are you worth. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tugging at my heartstrings. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all so very much, this is indeed precious to me. Thanks for your kind replies. Moonshine, thanks for your poem, it's beautiful and you are right, he does sing back to me. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"I love you Daniel You're my pride and Joy Sweet little Daniel Beautiful boy!" see, a fine example of true love...the love you have for your son is beautiful...and i know how it feels! those little men are a journey to the end of the rainbow...always met with a pot of gold |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Dawn, thank you, goodness this is an oldie hehe and I used to rhyme then Speaking of rainbows.. we saw a huge one on the way to school this morning M The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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