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Forbidden Fate..........................#1
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Forbidden Fate..........................#1 |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio 
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This was the first poem I posted in the new forums.  His name came to me through a gentle summer breeze. A voice near a whisper. A hearts silent plea. A magical union powerless through vast space. Twilight questions of what brought us to this place. Overwhelming mystery makes it hard to stay away. A time, a place and where to meet...I would choose the day. Imprisoned by the longing, fate finally tips his hat. Four rings you see won't stop us..it's far too late for that. His eyes capture mine. First kiss ensued thereafter. I drown within his soul right then...amidst the nervous laughter. Abundant time was not ours. It ended all too soon. Brief meetings we shall only have each night amongst the moon. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Talk about a coincidence! I was just reading this one this morning that I found so easily using the new search function!!! This is beautiful, Sally! Simply breathtaking!  Denise |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh - I love this "deja vu" stuff... Sally, your work is all great - and certainly this is just a little teaser.... You Passionate Poets... enjoy - maybe we can get Sal to post more often... Denise - I like the search function this way too... |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Sally these words speak to the hearts of many I'm sure... great job with this one.. If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sally this was wonderful! You described it so very well! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sally, You cought my eye, you caught my mind. You caught a rind of poetic kind. Well done. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Breath takingly beautiful as well as romantic |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How great to see you back, Sally!! Uncork that Mateus and stay for a while!!! |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Just a trip down memory lane, here. Though by looking at this along with my new pieces, I haven't changed all that much...~sigh~  Thank you Denise...you actually looked up my "stuff" eh? hehehe Nan, I'm not going anywhere. You guys'll be sick of me, I promise. Tori, yes...emotions felt by many. Thank you for the reply. WhtDove, Thank you for the kind reply. Glad you like. Sy...I think that's your first poetic reply.. To me. hee hee. (Oh STOP me, PLEASE!!) Thank you! Ruth, Thank you, kind one. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Mike, What's a mateus wit' you? Huh? What da? Dernit...gotta go get my dictionary now...FOOEY. Um....thanks, I think? (I'm going to keep "buggin'" you, so get used to it.) ((((huggles)))) and lisses. |
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Soleil Member
since 1999-06-12
Posts 113 |
just checking in and wow, what a blast from the past. Beautiful. |
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Laurel Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 22 |
This is one of the prettiest poems I have read so far! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very beautiful. Romantic and longing. Rich |
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