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We'll put the clocks into reverse
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We'll put the clocks into reverse |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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The window leaned against the moon To me, today has made no sense The clocks were running on their hands They brought black holes into my room Tomorrow I will be all right Tomorrow may not come so soon The bright illusion of the moon Will slowly fade into the night For all the worst and for the better I’ll find you beneath my skin You will eternally glow within This way we’ll always be together And I shall write another verse Before this night comes to an end If I could only hold your hand We’d put the clocks into reverse The pale moon would shrink in size The sun would once again appear I would wake up and you’d be near The night would melt inside our eyes I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
WOW! What can I say?! I love this! The desire to turn back time never sounded so poetic!!! You certainly are talented, Master! Denise |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Denise, I'm blushing. (I'm not really that talented, I don't deserve so much applause from someone who writes as well as you do) [This message has been edited by Master (edited 02-01-2000).] |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I think im becoming a bit of a master groupie hehe liked this much clocks running on there hands why did that make silly pictures in my head lol |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Wow, I'm with Kevin, I'm going to become a Master groupie too. You are simply awesome  . I loved the poem.~Susie~ |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
WOw, I got groupies now?! You're begining to convince me that I may be a decent poet. Thank you! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
I have searched the arcives!! ... far more then decent I would say... and again to this one... Bravo... ! If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Decent is certainly an understatement! |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Tori and Denise! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This likes me much |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Me thanks you much for liking this! |
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