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Angel of Despair |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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An angel sits alone, staring into the clouds She swears she'll never spread her wings again- to reveal the warmth of her soul therein. Her tears sprinkle down bitterly on the people below, She casts her shadows of sadness- on their unsuspecting laughter. ~Let her desparity be shown~ Never again will she feel the happiness that she felt once before... Let the whole world drown in her lonliness... Of a heart that has been torn.< !signature--> Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (edited 01-31-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Devina, I've never given much thought to angels being sad, I will now. Great writting! -SEA |
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The Haunted Poet Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37Sumner Washington |
I really liked this poem! The whole angel idea for the poem was very idealistic! Keep it up! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina- Sad to think of little angel tears. I like the images you conjured. ~Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, its very sad to see this angel so sad. Sometime when this little angel has cried her last tear, she will remember that she can fly. So fly away on these Winter nights, and the moon will be your calming light. ....Oh darkness, darkness of winters night afraid you are of the Angels light. Run away you evil gloom, for its the time of the winter moon. Parker. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
How dark this poem is~ Very nicely written though~ Marie~ |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
devina, "What" can possibly bring a smile back to an angel ?! Very Sad! But a very interesting uncommom thought ! Safwan |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I wonder what angel tears are made of? I don't think anyone's ever been able to sample one. This is adorable Liz |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This one actually came to me at the old wondering of where rain comes from...it's an obsession of mine, and maybe raindrops are just sad tears of a lonely angel (with a little of my feelings at the moment added in) Thanks for all your replies..and James-knowing my present mood...I'm glad you sensed a bit of my own despair in this, much love ~D< !signature--> Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (edited 01-31-2000).] |
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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
Someday she'll spread her wings again; she'll reveal her ever-glowing warmth. Her shadows of sadness will become shadows of flight. She'll feel NEW happiness never felt before. Because the people that love her and the angels beside her will mend her broken heart. Paul |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
so you too, know the sadness of the seraphim...I thought I was alone on that one. I now feel a little less lonely tonight. Thank you. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
My first thought is "Are you this sad angel?" You have done wonders with the concept and truly hope if this is you that you soon smile again  I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful Devina. I think there are lots more angels out there if this one continues to disappoint you he will be a fallen angel. James |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
Sad to picture an angel crying..  But u painted the picture so well and it was a good short poem. "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So sad  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sad yet beautiful! Well done! Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Paul- from the bottom of my heart...thank you!!! Serenity- glad I could help...wish we never felt alone!! Fist Knight- your comment alone has made me smile!!! Thank you for that!!! James- you are too sweet dear...  Rosalind- I wonder if angels really do cry...thank you for the comments!! Ruth and Denise- thank you sweethearts for the read!!!!< !signature--> Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (edited 02-03-2000).] |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
A very beautiful and sad poem. |
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