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evolution
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since 1999-06-24
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ma, usa

0 posted 2000-02-01 07:30 PM


In that instant I found love
The wayward meeting of our hands
he coldness of your skin melting in the warmth of mine
All my desires culminating in the scent of your hair
I saw my reason in your eyes
Oh how i never wanted anymore than this
anymore than you
Your skin tasted like love
as it gently brushed against me
When i tasted you, i tasted life
I found tranquility in your kiss
As i fell into you, I fell into greatness
For that moment I was more than I could ever be
In that instant I found love
In that instant I found you

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Zelda
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since 2000-02-01
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NOVA
1 posted 2000-02-01 07:38 PM


Whew!  Turn down the heat!!  That was smokin' hot...

I hope someday to find that love...
Very nicely written, E.
Z

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with you
2 posted 2000-02-01 10:12 PM


Evolution, simply breathtaking! Romantic, and oh so sweet! -SEA
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