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Shadow's Dancing (Like I said, I love a challenge!)
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Shadow's Dancing (Like I said, I love a challenge!) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight Their steps aren't practiced, They're improvised And the results are there in the skies Shining like diamonds right before our eyes. In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight They move across the void With such effortless grace Their twists and turns bring a smile to my face And they're so easy to see from this high place. In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight Take my hand my love And let me lead Because you're the only partner I'll ever want and need And since I've met you, my life has been blessed indeed. ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*sighs, very loudly* ah, how beautifully romantic. This is the type of poem I was expecting when I issued the challange. All have been wonderful, such an assortment, some romantic, some dark, some whistful. But it is the romantic poems that touch this born romantics heart. Thank you for the lovely post. Challange well met  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, yes, you certainly did say. And you certainly took to Hoot's challenge in gracefully poetic fashion. Another fine piece of writing! Claire |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you Hoot. . . Romance is my middle name. . . I was born this way. . . And Meadowmuse. . . thank you also. . . I love romance and it's almost a way of life for me. . . which is why I love it here so much. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Now that's what I call romantic poetry! Corinne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you Corinne. . .there's much more where that came from. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Well done and very romantic. I used a line in one of the last ones I wrote. A couple of people commented on it. If you are willing, use "In the twilight, love's last blooming" in a poem. what do you say? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
You've got it Marilyn! Already on it's way! --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sven- Nailed it on this one!!! Bravo and love the format!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very pretty, Sven! Denise |
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