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BlOoD TiEs Junior Member
since 1999-10-02
Posts 30New York City |
I hate when all I ask is for a little respect and I get treated like a reject. I hate when I dont know what to do because I can't tell whats fake or true. I hate when I try to be the best I can, yet still get treated as if I'm not a man. I hate the way you critique my every flaw, like stiff jabs to my jaw. I hate the way nothing goes right, needing the sunshine only at night. I hate the way the world is so brutal, trying to live happy nearly futile Dont bet on fast horses, bet on slow rabits. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I hate that too! Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Im with you both on this one, I hate it too! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
A lot of effort has gone into this poem and I love it for its simplicity and clevernes. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I hate hating, but I have to agree with you on this one Blood Ties  At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
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