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Arabian Knight
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 16
Saudi Arabia

0 posted 2000-02-01 01:57 PM


Alone I sit and face the sea
waves so vibrant ..birds so free
winds that dance with ecstacy
I sit alone my dear...

I wish i was the flowing wave
to flow to your remote enclave
and be your eyes' most humble slave
and gaurd you from your fear...

I wish i was a bird of grace
to fly throughout the open space
and land beside your lucious face
and wipe your dripping tear...

I wish i was the wind so light
to blow across the gloomy night
and surely we can then unite
and prove our love sincere...

Still alone I sit and pray
will we meet another day ?
and ask myself is there a way
to move our bodies near...?

Only hopes are what remain
and only hopes will keep me sane
and help control my burning pain
until your eyes appear...



[This message has been edited by Arabian Knight (edited 02-02-2000).]

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Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

1 posted 2000-02-01 02:10 PM


This is poetic sweetness in all its Glory. Your skill is masterful, your language  seductive. Excellent, to my way of thinking.

Welcome!

Claire

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-02-01 03:36 PM


Well Sir Knight. You have done it again.   I do believe we have found another hopless romatic to grace our boards. *sigh*
tulip
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since 1999-07-04
Posts 320
unknown
3 posted 2000-02-02 12:44 PM


How beautiful...sigh...
~ViXeN~
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada
4 posted 2000-02-02 12:58 PM


this is really beautiful... excuse me while i wipe the tears from my eyes.... i can totally relate to this
well done =)

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-02-02 11:05 AM


Very beautiful and romantic, I agree! Well done! A real pleasure to read!  

Denise

SEA
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with you
6 posted 2000-02-02 11:29 AM


A.K., this is so beautiful and flows gently. I really like it! -SEA
Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
Wisconsin
7 posted 2000-02-02 05:38 PM


Sir Knight , Welcome to Passions. Beautiful work. I look forward to reading more.  
jascanvey
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England
8 posted 2000-02-02 05:41 PM


Sir Knight may I be your damsel in distress?!! *sigh*
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