Open Poetry #5 |
Alone |
Arabian Knight Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 16Saudi Arabia |
Alone I sit and face the sea waves so vibrant ..birds so free winds that dance with ecstacy I sit alone my dear... I wish i was the flowing wave to flow to your remote enclave and be your eyes' most humble slave and gaurd you from your fear... I wish i was a bird of grace to fly throughout the open space and land beside your lucious face and wipe your dripping tear... I wish i was the wind so light to blow across the gloomy night and surely we can then unite and prove our love sincere... Still alone I sit and pray will we meet another day ? and ask myself is there a way to move our bodies near...? Only hopes are what remain and only hopes will keep me sane and help control my burning pain until your eyes appear... [This message has been edited by Arabian Knight (edited 02-02-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is poetic sweetness in all its Glory. Your skill is masterful, your language seductive. Excellent, to my way of thinking. Welcome! Claire |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Well Sir Knight. You have done it again. I do believe we have found another hopless romatic to grace our boards. *sigh* |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
How beautiful...sigh... |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
this is really beautiful... excuse me while i wipe the tears from my eyes.... i can totally relate to this well done =) |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful and romantic, I agree! Well done! A real pleasure to read! Denise |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
A.K., this is so beautiful and flows gently. I really like it! -SEA |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Sir Knight , Welcome to Passions. Beautiful work. I look forward to reading more. |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Sir Knight may I be your damsel in distress?!! *sigh* |
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