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Sven
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0 posted 2000-02-01 01:31 PM


I don't know if I've posted this one yet. . . but the feelings that are in it echo how I feel right now. . .

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In her arms my body finds rest
     at the end of the day when I am tired.
When she releases me, I am at my best
     my body renewed, my soul inspired.

In her arms my heart finds a home
     for the journey has been hard and long.
She helps me feel safe and never alone
     and makes my heart leap at her song.

In her arms is where I belong
     far from the noise and the strife.
She will give me comfort and help me along
     all the days of my life.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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mariee66
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1 posted 2000-02-01 01:44 PM


What a beautiful testament of love~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2000-02-01 04:00 PM


Beautiful poem, Sven.

 Nathan

Isis
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3 posted 2000-02-01 05:06 PM


As always Sven, it's a winner!  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Denise
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4 posted 2000-02-01 11:46 PM


Beautiful and romantic, Sven! Very nice!

Denise

Sally S.
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5 posted 2000-02-01 11:52 PM


Awwww....it's so very sweet, Sven.  Isn't love grand?!  
kitkat
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6 posted 2000-02-02 03:41 AM


What a lovely poem. Isn't it fantastic to come home and have your self renewed after a long day by the simple embrass of the one that you love.
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2000-02-02 05:49 AM


Your poetry is alays so romantic, that's why it is so compatable with my spirit
Liz

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2000-02-02 05:50 AM


you have inspired envy in me...now i am lonely all over again.
First__Knight
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9 posted 2000-02-02 05:53 AM


What a life long partner you have Sven.  And I am sure that she knows it with these great words you have given to her

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL



Sven
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10 posted 2000-02-02 12:56 PM


Thank you all. . .

Nathan, Mariee, Denise. . . always good to hear your words of praise.

Isis, thank you so much. . .I know that you understand. . .

Sally, yes love is grand. . .

Kitkat, I don't get to come home to this yet, but I hope to one day. . .

Elizabeth, I've always known. . .

First Knight, yes, she does. . .

Serenity, 'twas not my intention to make you feel more lonely than you already do. . . you to will know love again soon my friend. . . a love that will rival your name. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


JennyLee
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11 posted 2000-02-02 01:05 PM


She helps me feel safe and never alone
     and makes my heart leap at her song.

Such a lovely piece Sven  

Inspiring  

Jennifer Lee

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