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Safwan Arekat
Junior Member

since 2000-01-29

Posts 38
Bahrain

0 posted 2000-02-01 11:22 AM

Hello to all.. I must return to my classes and to my laboratory. My vacation amongst you here was truly MAGICAL. I leave you with this incantation to summon the poetic spirits in the river of our thoughts, to crush all barriers.

Spirits of Deep
awake from sleep
up to the surface
jump and leap

Gather here
and gather now
and flow as Words
in rush and speed

Seep through walls,
and open gaps
and overflow
the beaver’s heap

P E A C E

Safwan Arekat http://magicboat.com

[This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 02-01-2000).]

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-02-01 11:24 AM

This is lovely, Safwan! Please return as soon as you can! You are a very talented writer!

Denise

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-02-01 02:59 PM

Looking forward to your next visit, Safwan. Peace.

Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-02-01 03:14 PM

"Spirits of the deep, awake from your sleep".
Very magical. I enjoyed the ride and Safwan before you go,

May your magic carpet ride
be trouble free
full of blessings
and flowing poetry.

Take care, James

[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 02-01-2000).]

Safwan Arekat
Junior Member

since 2000-01-29

Posts 38
Bahrain

4 posted 2000-02-01 09:06 PM

Denise and Sunshine : Thank you very much, I look forward to coming back soon.
James: Your suggestion will make it flow better . But I just edited it back to its original version. I should learn not to hesitate too much . I wish you all the best.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-02-01 09:50 PM

Safwan-

Whatever you do ...
hurry back.
In the meantime ...
I will visit your homepage
and float the 'magic boat'
of synchronicity.

Peace and magic be yours.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2000-02-01 10:08 PM

Safwan,
That was a very short visit you payed us and I hope you'll return and give us some more of your beautiful poetry.
Liz

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