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childomine
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since 2000-01-25
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st. petersburg, FL

0 posted 2000-02-01 07:43 AM


my thoughts of you are but a whisper
like a soft and gentle breeze
lightly caressing my heart and soul
with bitter-sweet memories

your walk, your eyes, the way you smile
are all etched within my mind
a portrait of love and happiness
to carry with me through time

when I feel the sand beneath my feet
the wind whispering in my ear
I often think of how it was
and wish that you were here

I'll always feel a sadness
because we had to part
but because of having known you
sweet memories fill my heart

I love you dear brother!


© Copyright 2000 Kim Soule - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-01 11:03 AM


This is sadly beautiful and a touching tribute to Jeff. Very lovely, Childomine!
Denise

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2 posted 2000-02-01 12:50 PM


Very wonderful words. . . your loss and the love that you felt are very apparent. . .

Beautiful. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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3 posted 2000-02-01 12:58 PM


A bittersweet dedication, childomine. Thank you for sharing your heart's feelings.


Claire

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