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When Time Stands Still...
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When Time Stands Still... |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
When Time Stands Still... There is no clock in these momements of serinity, they go on throughout eternity. Focus on the rose petal in your room, the magical creation of the velveteen perfume. Look just beyond your own backyard, see the highest majesty, the mountain standing guard. As night stands still bringing in the moon, close your eyes and feel your heart swell like a balloon. The moment you actually heard, your best friend's laughter, remember how you teared, knowing it wouldn't last forever. Go inside, gaze into the eyes of innocence, that is dependent on you for all this child's essence. Remember the time you felt all the world was fake, then you escaped and found the quiet rippling of the lake. Running about just for fun, dancing in the rain, feeling glory and freedom upon God's refrain. Laying quietly about to sleep and feeling his hand upon your hair, yes, you say, I am safe; in the arms of someone who cares. You lost everything on that miserable day, then he reached out and touched your hand in that special way. The final words of one's destiny, and they whisper, "I love you" I hope this will always be in your memory. Julie ------------------------- [i]Your most prized possessions will be what you hold in your heart not in your hand. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hi Julie!! Great to see you here again!! This is absolutely breathtaking!! It is so beautiful!! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I agree. This is a stunning poem....a work to be proud of. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Julie, it 'is' so nice to see you here! And what a very beautiful poem,to come back with...  This piece is wonderful!.... |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Very nice Julie.....I really enjoyed this. Robert |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
All I need say is DITO to the above. Very nice. ~Gene BTW, hello, Julie nice to meet ya. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julie- This is just too pretty. Back to the top it goes ! Nice to meet you too. ~*Marge* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Denise, you are breath-taking. Thank you dear friend. You can't believe how much I miss being here regualarly. I do get a chance occassionally to pop in and read a few. 'deer, It is a really great day when I see your comments on my posts. Thank you. Pepper, my dear sweet friend thank you too. Robert, glad you enjoyed. the reasons I write. Gene, nice to meet you too. I'm sure you know by now what a wonderful place this is. Marge, it has been to long since I've been here, telling me nice to meet ya...I remember how beautiful you write. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Julie, I just came across this and it was stunning reminescent-a beautiful piece. I think you are most talented in your ability to express things. David |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
You are so sweet David...thank you. |
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