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ryun
Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 33
elsinore, ca, usa

0 posted 2000-02-01 05:38 AM


Why am I trying to explain my feelings i'm feelin
Expressing nothing.
gone in my mind stuck way behind, trust
My gut it's hard to with pride
Stuck in my mind is wher I hide.

All my problems and situations I face
I think about it until it's to late
Then it seems dumb.
So I sit and twiddle my thumbs..

As I write I don't think
I do; it flows out my mind from me to you
Expressions like this I never knew
I just thought like this to you..
Think..

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-02-01 11:27 AM


Sometimes those thoughts we are thinking are hard to come out on paper.
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-02-01 11:31 AM


Yes, they are, I agree. Very hard sometimes!
You've expressed your feelings well in this, though!  

Denise

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