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Secret Heart, Open Heart |
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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
Too much sorrow, Too much pain, Too much perfection With nothing to gain. Just as trusting, Just as nice, Just as magic With you in my life. Never enough love, Never enough voice, Never enough dreams With you as my choice. Always in beauty, Always in song, Always in love With you I belong. Let me twice live, Let me once die, Let me 'ever love, With you I can fly. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Me2, oh so romantic! Love it......... Wonderfull.......I could go on and on......  -SEA |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Where's the candle light, where's the wine?!! That is a perfect poem expressing love~ Well written~ Marie~ |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Me2, Very melodic, and nice sentiments.  ~Gene |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Let love take flight! Nice poem Me2 DH |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is most beautiful...and romantic I might add...you lil heartbreaker Paul!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
sigh, no wonder, me2, you could have written this for me as well, really liked this [This message has been edited by fc (edited 01-31-2000).] |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Really like the 'style' in which this one is written! Simple, but not. And such a happy subject, to boot. "The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
What a beautiful love poem Me2! I love the style in this one also! Style usually doesn't strike me so much, but this time you did the trick! I love this and look forward to reading more! If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul- Captivating and refreshing look at love. I like. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Paul! Very lovely indeed! Denise |
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