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Me2
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0 posted 2000-01-31 12:39 PM



Too much sorrow,
Too much pain,
Too much perfection
With nothing to gain.

Just as trusting,
Just as nice,
Just as magic
With you in my life.

Never enough love,
Never enough voice,
Never enough dreams
With you as my choice.

Always in beauty,
Always in song,
Always in love
With you I belong.

Let me twice live,
Let me once die,
Let me 'ever love,
With you I can fly.


© Copyright 2000 Paul Willis - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-01-31 12:44 PM


Me2, oh so romantic! Love it......... Wonderfull.......I could go on and on...... -SEA
mariee66
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2 posted 2000-01-31 01:17 PM


Where's the candle light, where's the wine?!!

That is a perfect poem expressing love~

Well written~

Marie~

Gene
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3 posted 2000-01-31 01:20 PM


Me2,

Very melodic, and nice sentiments.  

~Gene

Danny Holloway
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4 posted 2000-01-31 01:23 PM


Let love take flight!
Nice poem Me2
DH

devina
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Cali
5 posted 2000-01-31 03:13 PM


This is most beautiful...and romantic I might add...you lil heartbreaker Paul!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

fc
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6 posted 2000-01-31 05:02 PM


sigh, no wonder, me2, you could have written this for me as well, really liked this

[This message has been edited by fc (edited 01-31-2000).]

simplyYRREHS
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7 posted 2000-01-31 05:19 PM


Really like the 'style' in which this one is written!  Simple, but not.  And such a happy subject, to boot.  

 "The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau


Beri
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8 posted 2000-02-01 03:35 AM


What a beautiful love poem Me2!  I love the style in this one also!  Style usually doesn't strike me so much, but this time you did the trick!  I love this and look forward to reading more!  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...


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9 posted 2000-02-01 06:51 AM


Paul-
Captivating and refreshing look
at love.
I like.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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10 posted 2000-02-01 11:34 AM


This is very lovely, Paul! Very lovely indeed!    

Denise

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