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Like The Waves From The Shore
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Like The Waves From The Shore |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Like The Waves From The Shore ~Marge Tindal~ I must now ebb The time has come to sail my oceans Rolling away from you like the waves from the shore rippling out to the vastness of the sea that beckons my ship of folly I'll not ask you to stand the night vigil on the shoreline of memory You are here on the beaches of my memory even though I drift the tides If you should look into a starlit night and see a reflection of me know only that I will one day come crashing again to the shore swept homeward by the pull of the tide and you ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge! I was swept right along with you on those tides!! Denise |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
One of the most romantic poems I have read. Truly enchanting I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I can think of no one who can ebb like you.  Wonderful poem. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, I admire the means by which you incorporate the elements of nature into so much of your work, and this poem is (naturally!) no exception. Beautifully rendered and lovely to the "touch."  Claire |
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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
Marge ... MARGE! That's one for the records! You are so good! I hope I will be able to 'sea' with persepctive like that some day... You're an inspiration to us all. Paul |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise- Thanks for the 'clean-sweep'. David- I'm going to take that as the ultimate compliment coming from someone as romantic as you. Thank you, David. Balladeer- What a guy ! You move me to ~go with the flow~. Claire- Coming from you, whose work I so greatly admire ... I'm awash with joy. Thank you. Paul- Why, thank you very much. I hope you continue to enjoy what I do. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, I feel the undertow!. Must be love. Beautiful! Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend- Love flowing ... Love growing The 'undertow' keeps it moving.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Wow! That's one for Valentine's Day~ Beautiful, simply beautiful~ Marie~ |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Marge, I was swept away!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marie~ I am pleased that you found it so beautiful. Thank you. Tulip- Thanks. How cute ! Need a lifeguard? How about one of those hunks from Baywatch ? (Works for me ! ! ! ) ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Marge(y) - This is just so dreamy - I need a 'hunk' of driftwood to hang on to... K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kamla- Thanks sweetie. You will never be 'set adrift' unless there's a 'hunk' to hold onto. Love you, little one. ~*Marge(y)*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Your just so hard to keep up on sometimes drifting through passion's is like drifting through a tide of time I hope Ron doesn't tuck you away in a rhyme. Love lucky_t |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky- Thank you for the comments. Keep wading through these peaceful waters. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Submit this to the main site! Excellent! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice work!!!!!,I enjoyed it a lot!!!! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Marge~  Beautiful and romantic - I was captivated! For some reason, I feel like listening to "Ebb Tide" by the Righteous Brothers, your words always inspire me to write or remind me of songs and memories. That's a sign of a great poet!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wow |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My immense appreciation to Dixie for bumping this little archived piece~ Girlfriend ... you bumped a little piece of my heart ... THANK YOU~ I thank those of you who I missed eons ago on this~ I do sooooooo appreciate you all~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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