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The arrows of sparrows
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The arrows of sparrows |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The arrows of sparrows When confusion properties the mind. Those stars and beacons of a kind. Galaxies are lost in the night And comets pass beyond our sight. For it's these orbiting harbingers, These transcendental messages, That send their essence of explore, Into the limbo of evermore. Building blocks of generations Studies in sagacity with gyrations, Moments of flare of candles quick, Souls that lived in times quick pick. We salute these masters of relate, Of their query and debate. Brave warriors of worded arrows, Sending flights like flying sparrows. Verse and rhyme that stir our hearts With revelations to impart. Where empathy holds high the glass, In toasts of wines of hippocras. I am humble before such a one, It is she that brought recluse a sun. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"Tis another fine work Seymore  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree, this is wonderful! Hey, Sy, send a few of those sparrows my way, will ya! They seem to be avoiding me of late! Denise |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Send some my way too...loved that last couplet, Seymour. Elizabeth Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, These are the words from high above The beautious words of Poet Dove This is what I was speaking of The subtle genious poet mind Of words and phrase the heart define This is the perfect verse and rhyme Thanks for coming down from tree To write some lines of poetry Worth more than gold this epopee As for the subject, is it I? Who calls a poet name of Sy To write a verse to make me cry If so, you do true honor me With magnificent poetry And I thank you most humbly Love,Liz |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Seymour, don't leave me out. I could use some of those sparrows also. Wonderful my friend, wonderful. B Gravitt |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This sings like a sparrow, Sy..... You're awesome... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, The sparrows are there, They are every where. *L* Sy Denise, I sent a flock, look for them at break of dawn. *L* Sy Elizabeth, I sent some to Denise You are on the list. *L* Sy Elizabeth S, It is you that brought my sun. It is you that such of one. It is you that holds my head. It is you my flowerbed. Love ya Sy Betty, I gave the sparrows a list, you are second from the top. *L* SY. Nan, To you I have sent nightengales. Love Sy |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is beautiful!! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
The whispering of kindred spirits... 'Tis a beautiful ode to a beautiful sun. K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kamla, I like his whispers Liz |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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