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My Valentine |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
My Valentine  Many years I’ve searched the world Even crossed the Milky Way To find my dear Valentine There’s none for me til this day Once I went to Amsterdam For a Red Light District hunt But all I found were pussies And a scruffy old Dashund Just when I thought I found him Yeah, a hunk that makes ya gulp ! I really got excited Tripped and broke the red light bulb ! I wanted to recover And really needed a break Found myself this coffee shop Serving coffee with hashcake ! (Hi )Off to Paris then I was l’Amour city number one But, oh, do they speak funny Call ya "hun" instead of "hon" Took a walk along the Seine Some Clochard came floating by Gave me his seductive smile Really thought that day I’d die ! Needed food and some French wine ! Ordered French and got me snails ! Never eaten them before Only used them for "snail" mail. These were some of my ventures Went to Rome, London, Bombay But never found this lover Secret for this special day I’m tired of my travels Waiting for this secret dear So I was sort of hoping YOU’d be my Valentine this year Munda [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 01-31-2000).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Munda: ROFLMAO !!!! Hmmm, I'm not applying though...but the laughter was much needed and helps to control the WH in me, which got loose tonight..oh my!!...ooops HUSG Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Whoo Hoo!! Applauds. Wonderful Munda and I'd love to be your Valentine. lol |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is hillarious, Munda!! ROFL  Funny, clever poem, my dear!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda- So cute and comedic. Nice to see a great sense of humor. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Munda, As a Lady so Witty, so Talented, so Industrious, so Intelligent, (probably not a bad looker,either), and so well travelled---just remember, not many would Deserve the pleasure of your company--So keep looking, that right Rendezvous Lover is out there somewhere--(Maybe you ought to try looking in the USA next time-you'd probably have 'em lined up for a country mile!) Wonderfully witty and charming piece here, I really enjoyed the read & the review, David "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hi Munda  Well written! I enjoy humour in poetry most of what I write is to bring laughter to peoples lives laughter is the best medicine Rex }<{{{{o> |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
LOL Thanks everybody. I'm glad you're having as much fun reading this as I had writing it, but hey.....where are all the "secret Lovers!!!" (See, David, I'm trying the USA NOW ) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well, Munda - with a sense of humor like that, the US is certainly going to sit up and take notice... Very, very cute...  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Aww, that's Sweet!!! You coulda just asked me normal-like, but I accept anyway!!! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
There You go Munda, Your Poem might have done the trick after all--you might not have to sit along Valentine's eve after all!!! Way to go girl! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Hey Munda sweetie...you haven't tried Missouri yet.....the Show Me state!!!! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
David LOL Thanks Nan I mean no harm teacher. It's this wicked sense of humour taking over my brain every now and then. Must be the Dutch twist in me Christopher ! ....Robert ! ....does this mean I'll get a Valentine card for the first time in my life this year ?  |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
LOL Munda...this made my morning..I had a grand time reading it !!! Way To Go Jenny |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thank you Jenny, I'm glad it made you smile |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hey, this little poem of yours might just catch Mr. Wonderful's eye, if he likes to laugh, that is. This was hilarious! Liz |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thank you Elizabeth. I'm glad it brought a smile on your face. Off to bed now I am, dreaming more adventures of my Valentine ! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Munda...this was great |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
LOL Don't know how I missed this. I like a woman with a sense of humor. And you already know I like you, Munda Munda, na aan het hart. (Hope I didn't say an insult by mistake) ~Gene [This message has been edited by u_gene (edited 02-05-2000).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Ruth Thank you Gene "na aan het hart !" WOOHOOOOOOOO ! Thank you ! |
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Tweety Junior Member
since 1999-11-10
Posts 26stute, of insanity, Passions to be more |
I wouwd wove to be youw Vawentine nice wady, but I am a wady too and I don't think that wouwd do. Whewe awe aww the men fow this wady fuww of wivewy humow? She needs a Vawentine cawd fow this yeaw maybe next yeaw out to fine dine. |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
wow! omg! this was sooo cute! i smiled all the way through! brightened up my day! hehe |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Tweety...thank you sweety, who knows what you fly into one of these days ViXeN Thanks for your smile And you know what ? For the very first time in my life I received a Valentine's card !!! Yahoooooooo!!From who ? I haven't got a clue ! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
loved this...am glad I happened back to 5 to see it...thanks for the smiles |
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