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Do You Love Me? |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
"Do You Love Me?" It’s fourth down and goal-to-go, from the 1, They're down by three, here’s the snap... Do you love me? (She whispered in my ear). Yes, Yes, Score! But, do you love me any more? Of course, I love you. I married you, didn’t I? But, do you really love me still the same? Yes, now would you leave me alone, and let me watch the game? But, do you really love me? Do you really, really care? Would you shut up? And go get me another beer. Then, I noticed a tear running down her cheek. I took her in my arms and said, "Please forgive me dear, you mean the world to me, And Super Bowl is just like any other week." ____ < !signature--> "It often comes to me at night When lights are dim And thoughts are bright. As I ponder what to write, Take pen in hand And with it make My words appear as no mistake. Guided by a force unknown, I create a new And wondrous poem." ~Gene~ [This message has been edited by u_gene (edited 01-31-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I wonder how many living rooms this was repeated in last night! This is cute Gene! Denise |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
I agree with Denise...only, i highly doubt there were many that appologized afterwards... "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You sucked me in fast for the "boo-hoo's", this was great!  -SEA |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Denise, Exactly. I wrote it because, when I came into work today, one the guys here said, "My wife wouldn't leave me alone during the entire game." So, he printed out the poem and took it home to his wife tonight. Miss Abagail Mannering, There really are a lot of us good guys, you just have to look. SEA, Yeah, but if I called it Super Bowl, that would have sucked people in too.  ---- Gene |
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