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the man that you aren't
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the man that you aren't |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
I know that I hate the hurt the violence and the control but these I have learned to live with and you have grown older and not so. but when you try to talk of a cease fire of love and friendship and respect I hate you all the more. your words try to worm their way into my reason for living until I can't bear to hear even one more. after all you've put me through do you really expect for me to love you? you aren't, have never been and will never be the man that I need to love and now after all this time of living only to hate you I think I hate you more for the man that you aren't than for man you are. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Very sharp words~ Written very nicely~ Marie~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Someone with so very much love to give Should have more than hate as reason to live! A powerful punch, this poem does pack Wish you had all the love your life now lacks! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
My prayers go out to you Rex |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Wow! This one grabs me but hate takes up too much energy and destroys you in the end, counter-act it, find the sun and raise your face to it, feel the warmth...you just can't let him win.. HUSG sweetheart< !signature--> Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-31-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
fc,I understand.Truly. But, he is not worth all the energy it takes to hate someone. He doesn't care if you hate him. Let it go sweetie. It will only eat you up inside.- SEA |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
OUCH! This really packs a wallop. They say there is a thin line between love and hate. Be careful about crossing it. I feel so badly for you. Best thing is to let go and forgive, move on. Life is to short to waste it on someone that isn't worthy of your love. Great writing, I felt every single blow of your pen sword. You will be in my prayers. God Bless, Crying for you. |
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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
Wham! Bam! I'm on the floor. I hope I have the insight wihin myself to never do that what he did to you! It strikes a heavy note... I hope the song changes for you. Honestly! here's a new TRUE Friend for you, fc. That's one more reason for me to respond as, Me2 |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
well was gonna respond to each post, but will instead respond to all: yes it is all that you say it is, and it saddens me that this is inside me, but I am working on it, it will not take me down, and so I thank you for your friendship and your support.... hugs to all |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You hit the snail on the head here. It's true. Sometimes we do hate someone more for what they are not when we know they could have been with just a little effort on their part. Excellent writing, girl. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Damn girl...bitter indeed...with good reason I'm sure!! Maybe I might borrow this for an ex of mine???? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ah ... such a hard way to be loved... by someone who...loves to own you... huggsz |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
balladeer, thank you devina, sure, anytime...thank you oh and lr, thanks for the hugs, you snuck in at the same time as me lol almost didn't see you [This message has been edited by fc (edited 01-31-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree, FC, this is most excellent!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FC- It's easy to say ... let go of the anger. Not so easy to do. Let it be spent ... and then gone. One day at a time. Here's a *hug* I hope you'll find that writing it let's go of some of it. KEEP WRITING ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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The Haunted Poet Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37Sumner Washington |
OUCH! Wow is this poem emotional! Hatred will most likely destroy you in the end so my advice is to simply let go. It's now simple but if you hate that guy so much why waste the energy on him? Excellent poem!!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You obviously have a big heart and a caring soul....move on....smile....write more poetry....he's not worth it. |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
fc- this was beautiful, and heartfelt... I know what you are feeling, all too well. As hard as letting go is, at times, that seems to be the only key to releasing the hate. Take care... Z |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A sad song, but so beautifully sung. Good writing here Liz |
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