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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Please *guys* do NOT delete this one.  Where I come from men act like they are men when they behave like naughty *little* boys I toss them over my shoulder like an old specimen I have no time for pathetic small minded toys If you want to play within our adult sphere your true name should support your pitiful word or don't you have the courage to be seen and appear your actions are cowardly and totally absurd Go back to your playground and play with the devil cause you'll not hold any ground with me when you are so ashamed of being on the level cause in my book you are what *all* can see! < !signature--> Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
RainbowGirl, great piece I liked it very much. Strong words  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
RG, wow!! this is powerful!! and I love it!! well done!! *hugs* my friend. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Yanno -- I don't know what all the fuss is about -- but I saw on that other post where this Evil One got my Bro Toe's ire up -- and now you too RG.... This won't do at all -- Evil One -- I don't know you or what you've done -- but you've managed to piss off two of the nicest people I know on the whole planet. Also -- you now have two of the baddest people on the planet (me and toe) without any sympathy for whatever happens to you. Toe -- you got south of the mason/dixon -- I'll take north bro... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thanks guys...but I guess he doesn't have any kind of male hormones running through him...like I said...crèche must have shut early... Sad fact of life that some boys will never grow into men! Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Good, now you're with me: What next????? Cause believe me, you come within distance and I'll give you just what you want...try me?...I may be soft, I may be gentle but oh boy, do not trust me when I'm near the cutlery drawer...I love a nicely honed edge and it looks so pretty round the edges of my pasty...ooops I mean pastry...bet you're not willing to come any closer, are you? < !signature--> Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
ROFL@pasty -- must have been a WH slip there RG.... Hmmm ... a woman with a knife... I'd run! LOL Good guy -- just peace out man... |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hey let's just have a beer and settle down now.......I mean good grief....It's Friday!!!!! -SEA |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Dear Mr. Good Guy, I haven't entered into the continuing discourse, but would like to chat with you. Would you please email me at RenoDA@rngov.reno.ks.us would welcome the opportunity. Thanks, Mike |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
NH: You got me...totally 100%..*g* Bullies are such total cowards...here's your chance ladies, take the michael (oops, sorry) he is just a total jerk!!! (and I don't mean the nice kind in your hand) < !signature--> Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Well, yanno it does seem kinda cowardly to go a poetry bulletin board and start picking on pretty lady poets... I mean ...gawd ... what balls on this man.. what balls -- where are they??? [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Rainbow....you go girlfriend!! And to whoever you are...getting your kicks out of being uncouth and just plain mean..speaks volumes about you [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Well, Looky here now. It seems this gang of poets has run off the big bad Evil One... Perhaps he'll try a kindergarten playground next time.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
RG: Ya mean you didn't appreciate this new method of winning friends and influencing people? LOL |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Rainbow, you're too much of a lady to need to be concerned with emptying trash or cleaning mud off boots. This, er, fellow doesn't deserve your attention.....but I do like your style! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Well guys, it's like this..... Men that can behave as men I truly appreciate and love but small minded creatures that *try* to behave as men somehow come off sadly lacking, I guess they taste like mint instead of pineapple juice, you know....always looking at themselves in the mirror, no substance, no taste...hmmmmm...nothing like a wild woman, huh? and she only takes on men, at that! Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Who ever the heck you are........... You sure like stirrin the pot 'eh? Have a great Friday........GOOD GRIEF! -SEA |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Oh no Little dick.... We're neither out of control nor are we full of anger. We're just having fun exposing you for the idiot and coward you truly are... oh I could do this all day... And see -- you've run my posts up past 500 with all this horse manuer so now I'm even a senior member.... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Bal@ But I like to empty trash - in the bin! But I'll say this, when we women fear it is because no one will stand up and say "push off or get lost you pitiful bastard"..and that's what I'm aiming for because when we are afraid, we are scared and when we're scared we become vulnerable and I remember - being vulnerable - this guy is an absolute coward to the 9th degree and I want him HUNG!!! And I'll tell you why: Women are soft, we're loving, we care, we like to make our men feel loved, we like to be ourselves, we like to share our dreams and we like to share hugs but if we ever encounter a man that shows or treats our affection with violence it harms us for life! Sorry, but I feel strongly about my HUGS, they mean a lot to me! < !signature--> Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Don't be sorry RG -- I take your hugs seriously too... HuggsZ to you now Evil Dick I actually have a real life unlike you so- I have to go buy my kiddies some chalupas for supper -- but any time you want to rock and roll I'll be around numbnuts |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ladies The moral of this story is -- there is no need to be afraid of assholes like this guy. Not only are they weak cowards, but there are a lot more of us out here than there are of them... so never, ever, let him intimidate you again. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
SnlDad aka Good Guy aka BadBoy aka Smore aka,etc. If you call your actions "having fun"...then you have my pity. We all welcomed you here and replied politely to your work, did nothing to offend you...so I'm left wondering why you've showed such disrespect to people that were only kind to you? |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RainbowGirl, you and I both know first hand the violence from a "man". Amazing what can stir that pain back up to the surface. Squash it before it gets too big. He isn't worth it. None of those kind ever are. I wonder if he knows if at 500 yards he would hear it before it hits him?! -SEA |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Suthern: You know me my friend, only friends are worth the worry and you're one of them but the fact this guy attempts to place fear in my friends is enough to make me win " archer of the year" award...bullseye, type.. HUSG Sea: ROFL at 500 paces...you're in my mind sweetheart.. HUGS Pepper: Just tap your shoe sweetheart, it comes off fairly easily and disappears into nothing land..*g* HUSG Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
My, my, my !!! ... Ain't you pissed off sweetheart ? ... ... now what does "the nice kind in your hand" mean ? |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
I see the rage in here. From what I hear(I never saw any of his "work") he is like those I grew up with. School was hell for me. I know how it feels to be walked on, kicked, ignored, called names, etc. I cannot have any simpathy for a person(do I dare call him that) That does this kind of thing. If I ever see him in the act of doing it again or just in passing, he will know what a dragon's fire is all about. Extra crispy or extra extra crispy. "Cross this dragon and you will be burned." |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
woo hoo! Just another reason why I like you RG, a woman after my own heart! "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
See what happens when I'm away from passions for a few days, I miss out on everything....geesh, got to get caught up her. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Defeating Evil's easy, But leaves ugly scars behind, To defeat if takes more evil, And never leaves your mind. For some like me it's easy, It's a "reflex" of sorts to me, Others have to find it, Within depths that no one sees It's sad but true that evil, Exists around us all this way, It's hard to kick a habit, When it tempts you every day. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Now Toe, This is what you have to work out man... to the Chicken -- the snake is evil -- but he just wants some eggs for breakfast. It's never evil to defend your life or your love...against real Evil |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
RG...EXCELLENT POST GIRLFRIEND!!!! And I too believe that this is NOT a man. Probably can't even qualify as a parasite but that's neither here nor there. I would like to see him hung too (from a tree by the neck until dead, not from a sexual view as I'm sure HE would like to think.) Anyway I'm gonna read some more poetry and maybe even write some and (((((((((hugs))))))))) to my family here in the forum. BTW they are serious hugs and they are for all who are a part of this wondrous "family". Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Holy Cow !  I'm not in Open for a day and see what happens  Strong poem RG and I like the way you handle it  By the way, I may do that sometimes...."toss 'em over my shoulder"...always wanted to do something like that. |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
I like the power of your poetry but won't even pretend I know what is going on. Some advice though, sounds like the "evil one" isn't worth wasting any of your effort on. Some get off on pissing others off. It feeds their insecurities then makes them feel justified in what they do when they get a negative response. I don't pretend to understand it, but find it very sad indeed. God Bless |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
well I missed all this, but guess its not too late to send a hug?.....and a smile |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Hmm...I think I was gone from the forum for too long! Whoever this "Evil One" is though -- I think I've heard enough! RG -- You go girl! You are strong, and I admire what you have written!! If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I do believe I haven't commented yet - SHOCK!It seems RG - that you have helped to restore goodness - for I see no Evil One's around here anymore... 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
RG, wonderfull post. As my high school latin motto read "Truth Will Win" (can't remember the latin phrase). I'm sure that all this may fuel his little brain. I don't think we should waste our anger on him, just our pity. People like that have no sense of honour. They hide behind many assumed names, and just live in little dark places. They are little people, (people is more credit then they should get). Being disruptive is their sole purpose in life, they may never have a real home with family because they don't know how to be truthfull, and their heart is black. Yes pity is the least we can give them before we turn our backs. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh wow, put in a few extra hours at work and miss all of the fireworks. I have never seen RG so upset - so whoever, whenever this was done, well, I as sure missed it, but wouldn't want to have this person come back, not for love, nor money, nor RG's venom! RG, feel free to e-mail me with this guy's MO, and I'll keep a watch out, for if I read right, he was under an alias that "drug me in" and I hate to be drugged! Thanks! Sunshine Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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