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Parker
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0 posted 2000-01-31 11:08 AM

Our First Kiss
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as the cinders grow and the fire dies
the passion grips from deep inside
we hesitate as our lips draw near
a nervous smile sends away our fears

with ackward grace the moments pass
in grappling arms our kisses clash
a moments clumsiness is soon to pass
our first kiss, but not the last.

James Parker Haley

mariee66
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since 2000-01-30

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Recess, OfYourMind

1 posted 2000-01-31 11:12 AM

"Yeah, baby! Yeah!"

I remember my first kiss!

Nicely done!!

Marie~

dovesongs
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 102
Michigan

2 posted 2000-01-31 01:14 PM

I'm feeling the scorch of that first kiss!
Do you see my toes curling?

Gene
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since 2000-01-23

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Colorado, USA

3 posted 2000-01-31 01:27 PM

Oooo! a big wet smooch from Marie.

I wish my poems would get a respone like that.

~Gene

devina
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since 1999-10-28

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Cali

4 posted 2000-01-31 03:11 PM

Now you've got me thinking James...are you THAT good, or do you just write That good!!?? I'm sure the one on the other side of your passionate kiss is most fortunante!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Parker
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5 posted 2000-01-31 04:11 PM

Thanks Marie, every first kiss is just as good.

dovesongs, yes I do see those toes curling.

u_gene, I think I was just lucky with this one.

devina, ...... THAT GOOD.

.... but I need somebody new on the other side.

Parker

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

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Australia

6 posted 2000-01-31 07:47 PM

James what a lovely poem, enjoyed the read Tracie

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

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7 posted 2000-01-31 08:32 PM

The first kiss...how deliciously you've shared it with this reader.

Claire

devina
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Cali

8 posted 2000-01-31 09:01 PM

(Devina running up with lips puckered!!!) LOL! I couldn't resist writing that dear James...forgive me???

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

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Pennsylvania

9 posted 2000-01-31 09:21 PM

James
But wasn't it woth it? Yes!
Enjoyed
Liz

Alina Le Ann
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since 2000-01-30

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INDIANA

10 posted 2000-01-31 10:20 PM

I hear the sound of sweet love (and wet kisses

) in the air!!

I really enjoyed the poem...great job!!

One Who Understands
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since 2000-01-20

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Cedar Rapids, Iowa

11 posted 2000-02-01 12:09 PM

Just like it was yesterday, with the decription of this poem.

Beautiful

Beri
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since 1999-11-25

Posts 149

12 posted 2000-02-01 04:12 AM

How clearly you have brought back memories of my first kiss! Sweet...
But boy aren't yuo so sure of yourself? Haha -- just kidding! So you really are that good huh?

Devina could be lucky if she would go running -- heehee.

If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2000-02-01 05:21 AM

"Our first kiss, but not the last". I think you sumed it up very nicely. James

Parker
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14 posted 2000-02-01 10:51 AM

Thanks Tracie, Meadowmuse.

devina, pucker away, I'm going to have to keep that image.

Liz, yes always worth it my dear.

Alina Le Ann, sweet love I wish, but deliciously Wet kisses now that is more possible... also waiting with lips puckered.

One Who Understands, yes you do understand.

Beri, I don't really think I'm that good, but I must admit long passionate kissing, I live for it. Talking's nice, but no kissing, no jimmy boy. (the other subject i'll leave to the adult forum).

jmlee12345, thanks.

Parker

Martini
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

15 posted 2000-07-25 02:27 PM

ahhh
the memories of my first kiss....
well lets not go there!!

great description of the first kiss!!1

I really enjoyed this one...

if you like kisses as much as you say you should check out my poem "this kiss"

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

SEA

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with you

16 posted 2001-05-31 06:13 PM

LOVE THIS

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 05-31-2001).]

Parker
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17 posted 2001-05-31 08:28 PM

Sea, thank you.

maeve
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since 2001-08-01

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In the Outback

18 posted 2001-08-10 08:10 AM

Parker,
It's amazing what you find on a fishing trip.

Me

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

19 posted 2002-07-07 03:35 AM

Missing this poet and his poetry.
I could send this to someone who would identify with it as much as I do right now.
**sigh**
lovely

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

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Queensland, Australia

20 posted 2002-07-11 12:34 PM

Hey, where did he go? I miss all the gossip while I am gone.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

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High Springs, Florida

21 posted 2002-09-23 01:34 AM

hmm..i guess this is not a new post...lol but it seems to be up and about and i dont recall ever having read it!

so..just a little tidbit for devina...yes, that good....

enjoyed this one............

lv,g

"dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (09-23-2002 01:36 AM).]

Fuji
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since 2002-09-23

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22 posted 2002-09-23 04:27 AM

Wow! Great poem.

Parker
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23 posted 2002-09-23 09:35 AM

Temptress.... thanks.. the muse is so elusive at time.

Dee, gossip.... what gossip?

dg, you always find where I'm hiding.

.... and it was all you.. lol

Fuji, thanks for the read and Welcome to Passions.

Parker

CocoBaci
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Posts 3043

24 posted 2003-02-23 10:36 PM

A very sweet read indeed PoetFriendParker...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*

passing shadows
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25 posted 2004-04-18 10:35 PM

ah...I remember my first kiss! good write!

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