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vandana
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0 posted 2000-01-31 11:07 AM



Whisper of the raindrops
Against my window,
Sitting on a couch,
Guitar on my lap,
Paper's lyning on the floor,
Such confusion,

Here,Living without you,
Today was the day for me
To sing the blues
Don't have any clue,
About you coming back,

So I decide
To play a guitar
And write a song
Till you're gone away,
So I sit
As the rain comes down,

Looking back those years
A single teardrop on my cheecks,
I just can't bear,
Not to have you beside with me,
Holding hands,

Life still goes on,
Guitars and songs
Is all I've to spent with,
Now Iam playing my guitar,
With your song you wrote It for me,

So,guitars and more songs,
I've to write
without love,
Whisper of the raindrops
And my teardrop,
Singing my heart away,
singing my songs
I've written before in my life



[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 01-31-2000).]

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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
1 posted 2000-01-31 11:28 AM


Sometimes when the mornin's startin,
I get out my old Martin,
And pick away to start the day,
Sometimes it takes the blues away.

Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-01-31 11:38 AM


Very nice Vandana.
I must admit, I would not visualize you playing a guitar and singing the blues...
*smile*

dovesongs
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 102
Michigan
3 posted 2000-01-31 01:08 PM


Nice.  Nothing like music to soothe ones heart.  

 

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2000-01-31 01:10 PM


I love the vision of playing a guitar on a rainy day. I did a lot of thet in my youth. It's so easy to get lost in the beautiful sound of a guitar, it makes the hours pass.
A very lovely poem, vanana
Liz

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-02-04 10:49 AM


This is sweetly sorrowful, Vandana. I like it very much!

Denise

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