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One Who Understands
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since 2000-01-20
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Cedar Rapids, Iowa

0 posted 2000-01-31 12:42 PM



Tonight I feel as if my troubles have faded,
After all the years that I have waited.
For someone like you, to hold and to touch,
Someone like you, that I care for so much.
You make me laugh more than just once in a while,
And when I look in your eyes, you make me smile.

When the clock says that it's time, I wish you could stay,
Because everytime I'm around you, my heart melts away.
And It races with each and every touch of your hand,
For some reason, I feel that you truly understand.

When we talk on the phone, I just can't wait to see you,
And when I feel all alone, I call just to hear you.
When I lye awake at night, and it's you that I miss,
I think how it felt so right, the first time we kissed.



 

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SEA
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Member Seraphic
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1 posted 2000-01-31 12:46 PM


One, SO SO SWEET. Loved it! You made my heart beat faster. -SEA
mariee66
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since 2000-01-30
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Recess, OfYourMind
2 posted 2000-01-31 12:59 PM


WOW!~

My pulse raced, time for me to cuddle with my significant other~

Marie~

amber
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 240
los banos, ca,
3 posted 2000-01-31 01:38 AM


Thank you so much for bringing back this memory, i remember the first time i kissed the love of my life, and for an instant i almost forgot how special that time was. Beautiful poem, just lovely.

 Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always



Safwan Arekat
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since 2000-01-29
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Bahrain
4 posted 2000-01-31 03:43 AM


Thanks for the memory,

I do remember that one...and the few that followed !

Safwan

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
5 posted 2000-01-31 04:22 AM


Can I remember back that far? - Yes!
Liz

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
6 posted 2000-01-31 05:06 PM


So funny how we can feel this way....at any age. Nice poem, one.
Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
7 posted 2000-01-31 05:25 PM


Very sweet! How well I remember my first kiss from someone I truly loved...even wrote a poem about it years later...will post when I get home  
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

8 posted 2000-01-31 05:46 PM


This is so sweet so beautiful, well done!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Denise
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9 posted 2000-01-31 10:21 PM


A beautiful love poem! Very lovely, OWU!

Denise

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