Open Poetry #5 |
The First Time we Kissed |
One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Tonight I feel as if my troubles have faded, After all the years that I have waited. For someone like you, to hold and to touch, Someone like you, that I care for so much. You make me laugh more than just once in a while, And when I look in your eyes, you make me smile. When the clock says that it's time, I wish you could stay, Because everytime I'm around you, my heart melts away. And It races with each and every touch of your hand, For some reason, I feel that you truly understand. When we talk on the phone, I just can't wait to see you, And when I feel all alone, I call just to hear you. When I lye awake at night, and it's you that I miss, I think how it felt so right, the first time we kissed. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
One, SO SO SWEET. Loved it! You made my heart beat faster. -SEA |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
WOW!~ My pulse raced, time for me to cuddle with my significant other~ Marie~ |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
Thank you so much for bringing back this memory, i remember the first time i kissed the love of my life, and for an instant i almost forgot how special that time was. Beautiful poem, just lovely. Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Thanks for the memory, I do remember that one...and the few that followed ! Safwan |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Can I remember back that far? - Yes! Liz |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So funny how we can feel this way....at any age. Nice poem, one. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Very sweet! How well I remember my first kiss from someone I truly loved...even wrote a poem about it years later...will post when I get home |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is so sweet so beautiful, well done!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful love poem! Very lovely, OWU! Denise |
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