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SEA 
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What you said was forever but now we are apart you lied to me and broke my trusting heart Maybe you forgot or just didn't remember allow me to remind you what you said was forever You knew I'd never leave you said you'd always stay so why is it that you've walked away? Maybe you forgot or just didn't remember allow me to remind you what you said was forever Those painfull words hurt for so long but now I'm happy and my heart is strong....... -Because- Maybe you forgot or just didn't remember allow me to remind you what you said was Forever. -SEA- |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Nice poem. Sounds all too familiar. Yeah, keep repeating "forever" maybe my X will here it. ~Gene Oh, SEA, I just want you to know that you have the distinctive honor of being my 100th post.  [This message has been edited by u_gene (edited 01-30-2000).] |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad that forever doesn't mean the same thing to everybody!! Great poem, SEA!! Congratulations on '100' Gene! Boy you did that fast!! Denise |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Gene, why thank you! I am honored that I am your 100th post.  Denise, glad you liked it!  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA- Did I write this? Nah ... You have a way of getting right to the heart of things. I like it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Marge, thank you. I am flattered! -SEA |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
You've expressed yourself so well. And me too while you were at it...I feel I know exactly what you were getting at with this. But too bad, as was pointed out, "forever" isn't the same for everyone... If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Not even "forever and a day" carries much weight any more. If people were forced to honor "forever", there wouldn't be any divorce lawyers! What a concept!! Nice writing. |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
WOW!! I love the way you put this together... I don't know what else to say other than....WOW! Alina |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Alina, Wow is good! Thank you. -SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I am at a loss for words here too! Struck the heart and some good writing! |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
SEA~ Well... talk about cutting to the heart of things~ That was beautiful~ Marie~ |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
That was simply wonderful SEA You are so good at making the point stand out |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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One, Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! -SEA |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hi-C  )We must have fallen from the same hay wagon ... you, me, and countless others. Your poem really hit home. Does climbing back on the next wagon make sense.It worked for me ... I got lucky, I guess. Rex |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Very Nice ...It makes me wonder "Why" do we promise forever ? "Why" do we need to hear it ? Safwan |
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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
VERY nice, Sea. And how ironic; I just said the same thing (in different words) to someone of 14 years just this week! Kinda neat to know I'm not the only one that 'believes'in forever. I personally thank you. Paul |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rex..... glad you liked..... Safwan..... darn good questions..... I'm thinking insecurity....... Me2.....I thank you!...... glad you liked..... -SEA- |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I have written a new poem that has a similar theme. Will be posted shortly. Enjoyed reading yours, as always! Danny |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
SEA, Beautiful, just beautiful! Gulp! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Danny, looking forward to reading yours! Dovesongs, wow. thank you! -SEA- |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Sea, Forever, what a word. I hope we both find it one day!!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Why is it that we all at some time are hurt by someone we love and trust..I feel for you sea and have been down that road myself. Hugs to you and yes I bet your heart is sronger I know mine is...Tracie |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Absolutely wonderful!!! Your final stanza says it all, well done |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Hoot, your praise, just set the tone for my day! thank you, so glad you liked it!- SEA |
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SEA
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