Open Poetry #5 |
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Imperfect Page |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Down along the waterfront the sun begins to set. Dreams were cast upon the wind, the place where they'd first met. What happened to the joy, that once was found as two? What happened between them, to cause them both to rue? There's a longing in their hearts that is hued a red with rage, from a perfect love written upon an imperfect page. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can relate to this very well! Great poem, Childomine! ![]() Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
a perfect love on an imperfect page Wow...good poem!! I like it a lot... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Childomine- I thought it was a pretty perfect poem. Thanks for sharing this. ~*Marge*~ *I found this laying back on page 2 ... so back to the top. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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