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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
Oh! I've often wondered how poems were made Between the passions of gold and jade; To capture time with only your will, For just a moment to hold it still. My hopes and dreams, I can not deny To ponder where my fate shall lie; Whether it grows, or may it fade, A richer life from what is made. I've asked not for this, nor felt I sought With those I've loved and what it's brought; If fate shall chill and bring calm by me, You're truly Inspiration of love to be. I hope in the future, and not so far, That you'll gaze upon our special star;, May the light grow brighter without the shade, For I've often wondered how poems were made. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul- This is simply beautiful. Welcome to Passion's family of poet friends. Well, you don't 'have to wonder' anymore ! Poems are made in hearts like yours. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Paul!! This is indeed beautiful poetry! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
Marge~ Thanks! You brought tears to this guys eyes. My very first attempt at this! (being given to a special friend.) Thanks for the warm welcome. I don't feel so scared anymore ... Affectionately, Paul |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Beautiful first post. It's very musical. I like how you ended with the begining. Welcome, Me2  ~Gene |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! You entered with a good poem! I look forward to reading more from you. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I could say me2, but that's already your name You did such a nice piece there I would say you don't have to wonder anymore Life is singing the songs all you have to do is listen and write Well done, very well Welcome to passions The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I wish I had of been the first to reply, but I see that everyone liked it as well as I!!! Now don't go giving me credit for helping darlin, this was all you!! I just gave you the credit due to a man as talented as you!!! I told ya they'd love it!!! Much love, Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Splendid! Welcome to Passions, Me2!  Sherry |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
you truely captured "poetry" in this piece. Great work... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a beautiful poem to come in with Paul. I'm looking forward to reading more. Welcome to Passions. |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Welcome I think I have the answer to your question. Poems are made by the creative heart and soul of people with real emotion, like you and me Wonderful poem |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
And poof~ A poet is born~ Very nicely done, Me2  )marie~ |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
I know, lol, I make them, and I wonder still how they are made, where do they come from? just when I think my labor is finished, out pops another lol To capture time with only your will, For just a moment to hold it still. I love this, what a perfect description of poet and poem...welcome |
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