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Safwan Arekat
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Bahrain

0 posted 2000-01-30 02:44 PM




Whole in My Heart

Imagination draws the picture that I see
one that confines and subjugates me
painting You by light reflected into my eye
or the spirit of the soul my twain to be

In my Imagination arises a nagging doubt
Who in Creations presence am I looking at
An Angel sent through heavens gate
or the many names of memories past

In my imagination
I can take you apart

But whole you remain
in my heart


Safwan Arekat

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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 2000-01-30 02:56 PM


A reflective and well expressed piece, Safwan. Wonderfully titled, as well.

Claire

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2000-01-30 03:08 PM


This is beautiful poetry
Liz

Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-30 04:07 PM


I agree! This is fabulous, Safwan!

Denise

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-01-30 05:51 PM


Wonderful truth Safwan.  A pleasure to read..James
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-01-30 06:39 PM


Safwan-
Lovely lines holding truth.
~*Marge~>/b>


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Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-01-30 09:33 PM


Ah! I like this...nicely written.  
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