Open Poetry #5 |
Whole in My Heart |
Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Whole in My Heart Imagination draws the picture that I see one that confines and subjugates me painting You by light reflected into my eye or the spirit of the soul my twain to be In my Imagination arises a nagging doubt Who in Creations presence am I looking at An Angel sent through heavens gate or the many names of memories past In my imagination I can take you apart But whole you remain in my heart Safwan Arekat |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A reflective and well expressed piece, Safwan. Wonderfully titled, as well. Claire |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is beautiful poetry Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! This is fabulous, Safwan! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful truth Safwan. A pleasure to read..James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Safwan- Lovely lines holding truth. ~*Marge~>/b> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah! I like this...nicely written. |
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