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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Chaos Chaos comes with the dawn, Bringing the light of morn. The stars and moon have gone to sleep, With my fantasies to keep. And I awake new born. Now chaos rules the day And I am torn away. To fill the needs of all that live. With the real of take and give. To store the hay away. It is a tale of repeat And is a lonely street. A one on one that must be done. This work beneath the sun, This work that gives receipt. But comes the time of rest I do my very best To sail the moon and stars again. To pick up dreams, amen And dream myself illusions guest. Wherein the night does close the door And chaos does withdraw, I sail upon my phantom ship, To anchor in a slip, Of peace and pleasant dream once more. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The word for this one is.....exquisite, Sy. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sy, I love the theme of this piece...and your presentation, with its well~placed breaks, shares the recurring thought throughout the day of one who welcomes the dreamlight. Beautiful writing. Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
To anchor in a slip, Of peace--Your expression is so full and meaning so clear. You write words of wonder--and do it so well. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I,too, do the same as you, but could never express it as you do. This is exquisite. Love ya Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Exquisite from you is rare, that you much. Meadow, A beautiful comment, thank you. Martie, Nery nice comment, thank you Martie. *L* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those dreams are the best, aren't they?! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I think it's a universal thing, love ya back Sy Denise, Yes they are, *L* Sy |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
keep dreamin' Seymour!!! I am right behind you. Robert |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Robert, I will, thanks for the read. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sy: Where would we be without our dreams..  HUGS Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rainbow, Your rainbow comments are beautiful. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I don't know about "exquisite"... how bout splendiferous???  |
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