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Shutting out "forever more"
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Shutting out "forever more" |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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You plagurize my thoughts without saying a word. The color in your eyes change to set the mood. You have me weakened by all that you "don't" do. I now watch what I say, nothing I'm not suppose to. You anger in a minutes time how did you get so rude? You give me this nonchalant- "you're not important" attitude. Go ahead- deny me all, I'll try for you no more- But don't forsake me long... All my weight is pressed against this door- Shutting out "forever more" Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'd say keep that door shut.....(voice of experience) Save yourself the agony of divorce..... Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Thanks Denise, it seems like divorce- after four years of engagement!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I know.....it's very painful.....been there too (I'm so pathetic!).....but it is much cheaper than an actual divorce...LOL (well, at least I can laugh about it now!!! ) Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina- Listen to what Denise says. No one should have to look into smoldering eyes that terrorize. No one should have to watch what she says. No one should have to confront anger brewed in a moments time. Read what you've written, honey. See what we see. Close the door for good. There are those who are here for you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Devina, girl, you can do better....and deserve it. Don't settle for less, ok? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'll help you hold the door. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You guys are all sooo sweet, and I thank you from the bottom of my heart!!!!! I'm trying my hardest to get through this, and with my "family" here, it helps alot!!!!< !signature--> Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (edited 01-30-2000).] |
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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
By now you must realize that you've touched the hearts of others ... you did mine. What an accomplishment in life! Your hurt is painful; it's meant to be ... for a reason. But it won't last forever. Let me know if I can help. You helped me. Paul your new friend |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sadly I read what you have said Don't let him take you down. It is so bad There nicer gentleman out there Just look at me or Balladeer Me2 obviously would like to share Michael forgive that I took the liberty to use your name, but you are a gentleman. Not to leave anybody else out, you all are  The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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sirreen Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 19OR, USA |
While it may often seem so, not all us guys are total jerks. sirreen "Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds" Albert Einstein |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Helmut, you are the gentleman G* and I'm sure balladeer knows he's held in the utmost respect as well...you might have made him blush though  Thank you my friend, can you stand one more hug???Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Always The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, you are such a wonderful sweet girl, don't take more then you have too. All that will happen is you'll say why did I wait so long. I went through a similar situation, I was afraid of speaking opening on most harmless topics because it would cause her to get upset... I'm a new man now, none of that, "I speak therefor I am". Be who you have to be let noone stand in your way. I wasted five recent years of my life, but I'm alot happier now. Parker .... Hugs |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, he's right, Devina. There are many of us out here who would be tickled to find a woman with your character and beauty. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Ok, ok- now I'M the one blushing, you guys are too much!!! Me thinks my heart will ALWAYS lie in Passions!!! James- as always your opinion means so much, it takes a sweetheart to know a sweetheart!! Four years down and the rest of my life to go!!!And Micheal, you know when to say the right thing at the right time, and ANY woman would be lucky to capture you!! Hugs to you friend! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Devina, don't just put your weight behind that door, bolt it, lock it and run...........fast! Been there, you're lucky you didn't marry him. -SEA |
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