Open Poetry #5 |
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Whoopa and Whee |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
What's your favorite word? Mine are "whoopa" and "whee"! Two words of un-guided happiness and glee Coming from the child inside Screaming, shouting, girlish and free What's your favorite word? Mine are "whoopa" and "wheeeee" That make me laugh from the inside out In bursts of hee, hee, hee! With a lasting smile upon my lips I think I'll go outside and shout My two favorite words Before the seriousnes lurking somewhere beneath Finds its way out! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
How cute! (and I loved the foreboding end line..) ![]() Claire |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
"whoopa, wheeeee!" Need I say more? ![]() ~Gene |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so cute, Joy!! I know that feeling! Denise |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joy- A joyous, happy frolic. I liked it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Thank heaven I'm still technically a kid and can say those words without attracting too much surprised attention... This is a "whoopin'" good one, Joy! ![]() Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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dash rendor Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 21 |
I read this with a great smile, I will say no more! |
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