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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
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0 posted 2000-01-29 03:08 PM


What's your favorite word?
Mine are "whoopa" and "whee"!
Two words of un-guided happiness and glee
Coming from the child inside
Screaming, shouting, girlish and free
What's your favorite word?
Mine are "whoopa" and "wheeeee"
That make me laugh from the inside out
In bursts of hee, hee, hee!  
With a lasting smile upon my lips
I think I'll go outside and shout
My two favorite words
Before the seriousnes lurking somewhere beneath
Finds its way out!



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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 2000-01-29 03:55 PM


How cute! (and I loved the foreboding end line..)  


Claire

Gene
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since 2000-01-23
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2 posted 2000-01-29 04:05 PM


"whoopa, wheeeee!" Need I say more?  

~Gene

Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-29 10:53 PM


This is so cute, Joy!! I know that feeling!

Denise

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4 posted 2000-01-30 04:12 AM


Joy-
A joyous, happy frolic.
I liked it.
~*Marge*~


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Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
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5 posted 2000-01-30 04:43 AM


Thank heaven I'm still technically a kid and can say those words without attracting too much surprised attention...

This is a "whoopin'" good one, Joy!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon

dash rendor
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6 posted 2000-01-30 05:02 AM


I read this with a great smile, I will say no more!
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