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Memories of you
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Memories of you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Days went by, The night came and went by, Still I remember you, The summer came , as the sun comes out, I miss you so, Your memories are on my mind, The time isn't right yet, Because your memories make me cry at night, Don't know what will I do without you, Now the winter is near, And you are not here, you're gone away from me, God knows, why I am still here, Maybe god wants me to stay, and your memories keeps remminding me of those good times and bad times we had, I am sad, because christmas is on the way, I will remember those times, we spent together, on the christmas days, Memories of you, |
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Koon Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43Singapore |
I guess it's true that one will miss someone most at christmas time....sad but lovely poem...  Koon- |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very sad and lovely Vandana |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sad it's true well done the poem up there by you Memories is all you linger with But you do have memories and that is bliss Sad would be if you had none The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Another good one Vandana... enjoyed. Keep up the good work. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Vandana, Lovely poem and nicely written. They say, tis better to have loved, but sometimes that's hard to believe Keep writing Love LIz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Vandana, this is absolutely wonderful!! Well done!! Denise |
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