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'Twas a Dream?
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'Twas a Dream? |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
'Twas a Dream?"'Twas a dream like no other in soft slumber surreal A recaptured arising of my love's lone appeal Entreating me never to take wing down to sea Embrace and ensheath empty heart that is me Bid me come dine with you 'pon our fair Isle of Man, then in chambers, hushed whispers 'gainst the palm of my hand Singing softly your sentiment but withstanding protests Bringing brightly the candlelight nearest notions confessed And at once I am open And at once I am yours And at once I am loved again near the shadowed man's shores  Claire |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Claire - I particularly enjoyed the last stanza.....  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Me, too. The last stanza makes the poem. Good writing, Claire. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent, Claire! And such a lovely dream! Denise |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wistful and sad. I loved it! Your writing always shines. Mike |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
A sad but well written Dream So ellegantly filled the screen Words aligned in clear line Your poem so sad but such divine Love and peace may come to you The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh, Meadowmuse, how you write! This piece is lovely....and I too, like the last stanza...beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow, You write well and I enjoy your poems in particular this one. Sy |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You have a wonderful way with words, Claire. I enjoyed this poem |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thanks to all. Claire |
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