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One Kiss Goodbye
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One Kiss Goodbye |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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One Kiss Goodbye His heart he left unguarded pain was never his concern, it was all about the lessons loving without love in return. An whimsical teaser, a gentle, patient man, shoring up unstable castles in the sand. No one could really hold him there were those who tried, one woman held his heart, but that too was denied. He showed us all a place we hadn’t seen before, it was there inside of us but he unlocked that door. Kind-hearted yet aloof, a mind you can’t dismiss what I wouldn’t give now for a single goodbye kiss © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well done Corinne....Now I can think of some absolutely naughty things I could have responded with and I used control.....Yassee? Yassee how I'm defeating temptation?.....LOL |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Corinne, you are a fantastic poet, both in words and in your heart. This is a wonderful poem. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem, Corinne! (And admirable control, Toe! *G*) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Toe, your restraint is admirable!!! LngJohn, you are too kind, sir! Thanks so much, you have made my day! Thank you, Suthern. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Corinne...I've got all kinds of restraints! handcuffs, silk scarves, etc.etc.etc..... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Corinne! As always! Denise |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, a very lovely poem, but don't say goodbye, say hello with a kiss xxxxx. Much better for sequels too. Parker |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Corinne..this one speaks deeply to this battered heart of mine  |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
A beautiful poem! A tender, well worded portrait of someone dearly loved, who somehow couldn't love back. Very sad. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent writing, Corinne. Wonderful thoughts on display here  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Denise, thank you, you are always so supportive! Haleyja - Were that it were true, hello in a kiss, this man most of all, I shall always miss. Dear Hoot Owl M, Being alive means lessons, they're ours to learn...Somewhere out there for you is one who loves in return. So, please don't sell that lovely heart, it writes such sweet poetry, you'll love again my friend, this I gaurantee. Rosemary - thank you for the kind words! Balladeer, my dear, thank you so much! And last, (ahem) but never to be least, my new compadre Toe, what you are missing, hon, you may never know! If this thread continues, I may visit the Adult forum, and write something for Toe, yes write something just for him! LOL Corinne |
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