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Auricom45 Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 19Hialeah, Florida in the U.S.A |
Rain Dark clouds, dark sea Rain pours from the sky Dark mind, let it be Kiss the sun goodbye Shadows lost, vision hard A dark silhouette of drips Good feelings, I discard Bad feelings I dismiss Water falls, water crash Never ending stare All is gone, light is crashed What is is hidden, never aware It stops, light pours Back to normal, rain gone by Leaves dry, seeds spore Another storm comes from the corner of my eye That strange feeling we had in the war. Have you found anything in your lives since to equal it in strength? A sort of splendid carelessness it was, holding us together. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I hope you have some sunshine in between these storms cause then you'll get a rainbow..  HUGS |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Reminds me of my own poems about rain. . .the one thing that I have learned is that the rain does end. . . and the sun warms. . . Excellent work my friend and welcome. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
In my book, you can't write a bad poem about the rain |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Loved it Auricom. Excellent  tracie |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad yet beautifully done! I wish you sunny weather! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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