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Walk Softly
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Walk Softly |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Walk softly into the night, under the stars twinkling light. Walk softly into the night, beneath the pale moon's light. Walk softly into the night, let my courage replace thy fright. Walk softly into the night, let my heartbeat be thy guide. Walk softly into the night, let my love be your light. Walk softly into the night, my love awaits shinng bright. Walk softly into the night, but know that I am there to hold you tight. Walk softly into the night. B Gravitt |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Betty, there are very nice emotions on display here and a peaceful calming effect that is very comfortable. Nice work. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This kind of brought to mind Dylan Thomas..."Do not go gently into the night..." I liked the feel of it a lot. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Nice thoughts..*sigh*..  HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Thank you Balladeer. hoot_owl_rn, thank you for the read. |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
RainbowGirl... I love to "dream". Thank you for the read.B Gravitt |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Betty! Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
such a calming, simple poem, very nice! |
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Jim Hastings Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 23Arizona |
I have to agree, very nicely done. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is absolutely lovely Betty! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
dsnyder, devina, Jim, Echo... I'm sorry about the late thank you, but I work nights. Thank you all so much for the read. Have a wonderful New Year. B Gravitt |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep, agree with balladeer, very nice emotions, but yet a calming invitation, as if you can see your hand extended to help... |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Thank you lloveit. I am so pleased when other poets can see what I am trying to say and do. It gives me a much needed "boost". B Gravitt |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Simply lovely Betty.....a wonderful read... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Thank you Pepper. Have a wonderful New Year. B Gravitt |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Betty, I echo the thoughts and words of the many others who have read this, it really is lovely. Wonderful poem. If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Thank you Beri. B Gravitt |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
Walk softly under the rain Walk proudly forget the pain the most important thing in this life is to keep walking |
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