Open Poetry #5 |
The Past Year |
far and away Junior Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 20 |
As I look back on the past year, I held back all of my tears, There was a lot hurt and pain, And the tears should fallen like the rain, Stuck living the life of hell, Wanting to let out a scream or yell, Looking for someone to talk to, But who could be so true, That is when I met you, Saving me when I was blue, Taking all the pain away, Soothing my soul each and everyday, You listen to me when I was down, Always taking away that dreaded frown, Turning that frown into a bright smile, I feel like we know each other for a while, We have shared a lot with each other, I trust you as much as I do my mother, By showing that you care about me, Our love will spread and breed, I wish I was with you, now, on this xmas day, As each day passes, I pray we have our way, Together we shall be, with love that will last, Wiping out all the pain, and erasing the past. |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
I liked the poem and I hope you write more. Keep your head up. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Far and away, sounds like it was a year to remember. Elizabeth Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Amen to happy endings! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is great F.A.W. Hope to read more soon! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
I hope the new year holds wonderful things for the both of you. I like the poem. Keep them coming. B Gravitt |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
you cannot drive a car looking at the rear mirror. we should always look at the bright side of everything.. why wont you look at the accomplishments you made in the last year other than meeting that lady |
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