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far and away
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since 1999-12-17
Posts 20


0 posted 1999-12-26 03:03 PM


As I look back on the past year,
I held back all of my tears,
There was a lot hurt and pain,
And the tears should fallen like the rain,

Stuck living the life of hell,
Wanting to let out a scream or yell,
Looking for someone to talk to,
But who could be so true,

That is when I met you,
Saving me when I was blue,
Taking all the pain away,
Soothing my soul each  and everyday,

You listen to me when I was down,
Always taking away that dreaded frown,
Turning that frown into a bright smile,
I feel like we know each other for a while,

We have shared a lot with each other,
I trust you as much as I do my mother,
By showing that you care about me,
Our love will spread and breed,

I wish I was with you, now, on this xmas day,
As each day passes, I pray we have our way,
Together we shall be, with love that will last,
Wiping out all the pain, and erasing the past.



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Quiet Lightning
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 56

1 posted 1999-12-26 03:16 PM


I liked the poem and I hope you write more.
Keep your head up.

Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871
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2 posted 1999-12-26 10:10 PM


Far and away, sounds like it was a year to remember.

Elizabeth

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 1999-12-27 01:28 AM


Amen to happy endings!  

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark



Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
4 posted 1999-12-27 05:00 AM


This is great F.A.W.  Hope to read more soon!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Betty Gravitt
Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222
Georgia United States
5 posted 1999-12-27 12:31 PM


I hope the new year holds wonderful things for the both of you. I like the poem. Keep them coming.

 B Gravitt



Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2007-11-12 07:50 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

ramisf
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since 2007-05-17
Posts 93

7 posted 2009-03-15 12:50 PM


you cannot drive a car looking at the rear mirror. we should always look at the bright side of everything.. why wont you look at the accomplishments you made in the last year other than meeting that lady
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