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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Do you want to be the one that I adore? Do you want to be the one whose heart I explore? If you do, can you let me know? This way I can make it so. But if your answer is yes -- Than to you I must confess: That you should always keep in mind That I cannot be simply wined and dined. I need many things that can result from your love -- Do you think you can provide them to me (granted with help from heaven above?) I need your kindness, consideration, caring, and patience -- Do you think you can help me when I feel I've lost all sense? You already seem to possess the trick to provide these needs to me -- I just want you to be sure that you can remain as strong a man as I need you to be! If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Oh.....I really like this one!!! Very good. Robert |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This poem holds much wisdom  I can live with the idea That we are merely actors Playing a part But I do wish Whoever is writing my script Would learn to use A few more Happy Endings ~Javan |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Thanx you two -- glad you liked it. And yes, Hoot it does hold much wisdom -- its a vision into me that I felt needed to be expressed. If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Beri! I like this very much! Denise |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
This is a good check list to go by when considering a new "man for the job"...this one should be printed and kept in a purse for future reference. Sounds as though this comes from a very sure footed individual. "Dont' interview for a position acting as if you need the job, but instead, act as if the employer needs you". I like this. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beri, this is a great example of a confident woman. Accept only the best! I like...... I like.....  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beri- This is very nicely said. I like the strength and confidence. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I hope the answer is YES!!! Good luck to you!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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The Haunted Poet Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37Sumner Washington |
I agree with Hoot that it holds much wisdom. You have great talent and I am looking forward to reading more! |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
And a woman's strength shines through~ Very nicely written~ Marie~ |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Thank you all for your comments. And thanks for seeing me as strong and confident -- it wasn't until recently that I became this way, and honestly those two traits do not always shine through -- it seems to have been a rare moment, but I think to myself, "Hey, at least I know there is strength and confidence definitely in there inside of me somewhere!" And Devina -- I hope the answer is yes also...we'll see...  If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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