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Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

0 posted 2000-01-27 08:12 PM


Confusion

Constantly groping to understand your thoughts
Outwardly calm and hating you
Never showing the real inside
Fighting the way I feel
Understanding I can't change it
Simple conversations with complex meanings
Inwardly seething with hurt
Obstinately refusing to accept what I know
Never understanding or accepting anything

In one word: CONFUSION


 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 2000-01-28 12:28 PM


Oh, that's a hard place to be  

 I can live with the idea
That we are merely actors
Playing a part
But I do wish
Whoever is writing my script
Would learn to use
A few more Happy Endings
~Javan

CrazyChick
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since 2000-01-05
Posts 132

2 posted 2000-01-28 01:39 AM


I feel that way sometimes to.
Great work!!!!!

G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
3 posted 2000-01-28 09:53 AM


There's a person I thought of when I read this and I cal totally relate. Good job.

G

Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
4 posted 2000-01-28 12:28 PM


Thanks.... anyone have suggestions on improvements or additions that can be made?

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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